for The Suckling2/19/2010 c1 
20Minor Masterpiece
I love the dark feel to this poem. It sounded like it could be a poetic monologue in the beginning of a movie which was just brilliant. I adore the short style it was written in and it was a very creative title. Wonderful job!
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20Minor MasterpieceI love the dark feel to this poem. It sounded like it could be a poetic monologue in the beginning of a movie which was just brilliant. I adore the short style it was written in and it was a very creative title. Wonderful job!
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4/16/2009 c1 tehom
I am impressed, this is very good. Though I have absolutely no experience when it comes to poetry, so my review might not mean anything. I love it.
I am impressed, this is very good. Though I have absolutely no experience when it comes to poetry, so my review might not mean anything. I love it.
9/23/2008 c1 149McKinley Cooper
Wretching and awful. Artitically told. Vivd through the blackness.
McKinley
149McKinley CooperWretching and awful. Artitically told. Vivd through the blackness.
McKinley
6/24/2008 c1 23witheredxwaste
I will be taking a very uneducated guess, but is this poem about someone's mother being a prostitute? It seems like it... well, great poem! keep writing!
Signed, Lucy Burdick
23witheredxwasteI will be taking a very uneducated guess, but is this poem about someone's mother being a prostitute? It seems like it... well, great poem! keep writing!
Signed, Lucy Burdick
6/14/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
"the cores bitter."... core's
This piece is absolutely amazing because the descriptions are so beautiful. I also like the allusions at the end. Great job.
612simpleplan13"the cores bitter."... core's
This piece is absolutely amazing because the descriptions are so beautiful. I also like the allusions at the end. Great job.