for Loneliness7/25/2008 c1 
42harrypotterstarz
it's really good...the bold letters making a word make it even more powerful. Keep Writing!
42harrypotterstarzit's really good...the bold letters making a word make it even more powerful. Keep Writing!
6/16/2008 c1 14Thoughtful Silence
This was beautiful, in the way that it isn't beautiful... if you know what I mean. It was well written - I really liked the little addition of 'lonely', it's as if this loneliness is always there for this person, lurking beneath the surface. Anyways, good job on this and keep up the good work.
-T.S.
14Thoughtful SilenceThis was beautiful, in the way that it isn't beautiful... if you know what I mean. It was well written - I really liked the little addition of 'lonely', it's as if this loneliness is always there for this person, lurking beneath the surface. Anyways, good job on this and keep up the good work.
-T.S.
6/13/2008 c1 lymli
it's interesting the mixing between lonely death and broken love.
it's a heartfelt haiku.
it's interesting the mixing between lonely death and broken love.
it's a heartfelt haiku.