for What I Always Knew I Never Wanted8/6/2013 c3 
2Marguerite Grimmett
Gah! Why is there no chapter four? :P Anyway, I love this story, though I hate how the guys treat her and MATT FREAKING LARKIN INJURED HER ANKLES? WHAT KIND OF PERSON IS HE? EVERYBODY KNOWS THAT DECENT GUYS DON'T EVER, EVER HIT A FEMALE!
Ahem. Just wanted to get that out of my system.
2Marguerite GrimmettGah! Why is there no chapter four? :P Anyway, I love this story, though I hate how the guys treat her and MATT FREAKING LARKIN INJURED HER ANKLES? WHAT KIND OF PERSON IS HE? EVERYBODY KNOWS THAT DECENT GUYS DON'T EVER, EVER HIT A FEMALE!
Ahem. Just wanted to get that out of my system.
9/26/2008 c3 OoohLookACat
sacrificing a potential friendship
that's nice of her
and he sticks up for her...
in an odd way
he's looking out for her, sort of
can't wait for more
izzie
sacrificing a potential friendship
that's nice of her
and he sticks up for her...
in an odd way
he's looking out for her, sort of
can't wait for more
izzie
8/6/2008 c2 ellipsis
As usual, a very good chapter.
After reading "Pen is Mightier", my first impression was that you seem to specialize in sarcastic, misunderstood, and very complex characters. Not that that's bad, of course. I'm fine with the fact that Tess is the Outcast of the school, but why does everyone hate her? Did she purposely offend each and every person, or is there some sort of other reason that you're going to add in later? I think I'm running off topic.
Anyways, wonderful writing, update sooner.
As usual, a very good chapter.
After reading "Pen is Mightier", my first impression was that you seem to specialize in sarcastic, misunderstood, and very complex characters. Not that that's bad, of course. I'm fine with the fact that Tess is the Outcast of the school, but why does everyone hate her? Did she purposely offend each and every person, or is there some sort of other reason that you're going to add in later? I think I'm running off topic.
Anyways, wonderful writing, update sooner.
8/4/2008 c2 2xylophone
Well, this certainly is getting exciting.
I love Tess's sarcasticness, but I really want to find more out about her past, because right now, she seems a little bit one-dimensional.
I'll be waiting for chapt. 2!
Oh, and I love Amber. (Hahh!)
2xylophoneWell, this certainly is getting exciting.
I love Tess's sarcasticness, but I really want to find more out about her past, because right now, she seems a little bit one-dimensional.
I'll be waiting for chapt. 2!
Oh, and I love Amber. (Hahh!)
8/4/2008 c2 OoohLookACat
ooh that last one -
such a good burn!
and gasp
a cute step leigh
very interesting
i see he's quiet
or seems quiet
which, i guess is cool
can't wait for more
izzie
ooh that last one -
such a good burn!
and gasp
a cute step leigh
very interesting
i see he's quiet
or seems quiet
which, i guess is cool
can't wait for more
izzie
8/4/2008 c2 rockchick84
I am really liking the multidimensional portrayal of Tess and enjoying the buildup of the story with the social dynamics at school.
I really hope you keep updating regularly.
I am really liking the multidimensional portrayal of Tess and enjoying the buildup of the story with the social dynamics at school.
I really hope you keep updating regularly.
7/3/2008 c1 ellipsis
nice to know you finally started to write again. great chapter, by the way.
nice to know you finally started to write again. great chapter, by the way.
6/15/2008 c1 3Alexis Grey
Witty, entertaining and just pure... charisma, charm oozing through this story. This is definitely worth the read. You have restored my hope in finding quirky characters written for young people that aren't just carbon copies of Ugly Betty or Juno.
3Alexis GreyWitty, entertaining and just pure... charisma, charm oozing through this story. This is definitely worth the read. You have restored my hope in finding quirky characters written for young people that aren't just carbon copies of Ugly Betty or Juno.
6/14/2008 c1 OoohLookACat
ooh very interesting
i like it so far
especially how different tess is to everyone
its going to be an interesting read
can't wait for the next chapter
izzie
ooh very interesting
i like it so far
especially how different tess is to everyone
its going to be an interesting read
can't wait for the next chapter
izzie
6/13/2008 c1 Bazooka Joy
Thank God I'm through wit high school.
Every school has an Amber.
Every school has a Tess.
And god knows I wouldn't like either of them.
But I love to read about them.
This isn't the best written story ever (I don't think that exists anyway) but this is easy to read and interesting.
Thank God I'm through wit high school.
Every school has an Amber.
Every school has a Tess.
And god knows I wouldn't like either of them.
But I love to read about them.
This isn't the best written story ever (I don't think that exists anyway) but this is easy to read and interesting.