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6/30/2008 c1 gigglemagic
dear mel this is giggles. aka your long lost sister (Bri) lol. this poem is very touching!
6/14/2008 c1 Counting Petals
"I can hardly breath" = "breathe"

That was the only thing I could see wrong with it, though.
6/14/2008 c1 15Scarlett Wynter
the flow and repetition made this sound very pretty, like a sad love song... Nice work. ^_^
6/14/2008 c1 306Ashelin
It's a little repetitious, but overall it was good. Nice emotion, nice theme. Good job.

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