for Horse6/10/2012 c10 oblivion.x
oh my god this is really good! Ive been on fictionpress for a long time now and i haven't read anything this intense, emotional, harsh and beautiful as your story:) your characters are so extremely real and that last chapter was so sad but aptly fitting too... just wanted to say you're amazing and a really good writer!
once again, I'd love to see more :) keep writing
oh my god this is really good! Ive been on fictionpress for a long time now and i haven't read anything this intense, emotional, harsh and beautiful as your story:) your characters are so extremely real and that last chapter was so sad but aptly fitting too... just wanted to say you're amazing and a really good writer!
once again, I'd love to see more :) keep writing
8/16/2010 c4 
2LarunaBelle
I think this chapter is very good, the emotion is realistic, sad.
But the typos and misused words, I'm wondering if they're because of Lyle. Probably, but I just thought I'd mention it.
2LarunaBelleI think this chapter is very good, the emotion is realistic, sad.
But the typos and misused words, I'm wondering if they're because of Lyle. Probably, but I just thought I'd mention it.
8/16/2010 c3 LarunaBelle
Gritty, emotional and so very real.
I don't know what else to say, besides that this is intriguing and saddening in the best way possible for a written work.
Gritty, emotional and so very real.
I don't know what else to say, besides that this is intriguing and saddening in the best way possible for a written work.
8/16/2010 c2 LarunaBelle
I've been on FP longer than I've had an account, and I've never seen something like this.
It's real, it's oddly heart wrenching and I like it.
I've been on FP longer than I've had an account, and I've never seen something like this.
It's real, it's oddly heart wrenching and I like it.
4/27/2010 c10 Mary Cate
This was great! A really incredible story! Oh my God. Reading it sent me through so many emotions!
I love the characters, they're all so believable. And the way you told it, through anecdotes, was brilliant. It made me think of "Rant" by Chuck Palahniuk.
This was great! A really incredible story! Oh my God. Reading it sent me through so many emotions!
I love the characters, they're all so believable. And the way you told it, through anecdotes, was brilliant. It made me think of "Rant" by Chuck Palahniuk.
2/10/2010 c6 Stormer
I loved this chapter, though I have to say I'm not a huge fan of this Preston guy ;) But it sounds to me as if his feelings for her (ie. not many at all) were mutual
I loved this chapter, though I have to say I'm not a huge fan of this Preston guy ;) But it sounds to me as if his feelings for her (ie. not many at all) were mutual
1/30/2010 c10 128vitriolicvermilion
I saw this story recommended on the hype board and decided to give it a looksie.
Oh my god. I thought the synopsis might be good, but from the beginning, I was hooked. This story was intoxicating, exhilarating. It broke my heart. You could've made the reader love Sonja or hate Sonja, but you didn't do either. You just showed her to us, shared her with us, and let us decide. I think that's why this is so good.
If you couldn't tell from the above, I loved this.
128vitriolicvermilionI saw this story recommended on the hype board and decided to give it a looksie.
Oh my god. I thought the synopsis might be good, but from the beginning, I was hooked. This story was intoxicating, exhilarating. It broke my heart. You could've made the reader love Sonja or hate Sonja, but you didn't do either. You just showed her to us, shared her with us, and let us decide. I think that's why this is so good.
If you couldn't tell from the above, I loved this.
3/30/2009 c1 8Irresistible Apple
This is really random and I apologize but... I was struggling to fall asleep a couple of nights ago and for some reason I thought about this story. I remembered how good it was and I was thinking...hey...that would make a fantastic movie! So I obviously I had to leave a random review to tell you that XD
-Apple
8Irresistible AppleThis is really random and I apologize but... I was struggling to fall asleep a couple of nights ago and for some reason I thought about this story. I remembered how good it was and I was thinking...hey...that would make a fantastic movie! So I obviously I had to leave a random review to tell you that XD
-Apple
1/6/2009 c10 27Ember Eyed Girl
This is an extremely original story. Unusual characters, a dramatic and cliche, but not unworthy plot, and different perspectives. I truly enjoyed reading this story, and cannot wait for you to finish it.
27Ember Eyed GirlThis is an extremely original story. Unusual characters, a dramatic and cliche, but not unworthy plot, and different perspectives. I truly enjoyed reading this story, and cannot wait for you to finish it.
1/5/2009 c10 4Frayling0
Yay, its finally finished. It's great! Deep, dark and moving. I love it - Luke
4Frayling0Yay, its finally finished. It's great! Deep, dark and moving. I love it - Luke
1/4/2009 c5 1Jessie My Love
Great chapter yet again~
You sure have such good characters to talk about Sonja.
I also like how you're covering different parts of her life, being the parts that people remember the most.
Well, I'm done for now~
I'll probably read more later :]
-Jessie my l o v e
1Jessie My LoveGreat chapter yet again~
You sure have such good characters to talk about Sonja.
I also like how you're covering different parts of her life, being the parts that people remember the most.
Well, I'm done for now~
I'll probably read more later :]
-Jessie my l o v e
1/4/2009 c4 Jessie My Love
Aw D:
I felt so bad for the guy. I wish that he could've actually had her. Poor thing.
Yet again, you delivered another great chapter.
This really is a good way of getting the reader to get to know your character.
Onto the next chapter~
-Jessie my l o v e
Aw D:
I felt so bad for the guy. I wish that he could've actually had her. Poor thing.
Yet again, you delivered another great chapter.
This really is a good way of getting the reader to get to know your character.
Onto the next chapter~
-Jessie my l o v e
1/4/2009 c3 Jessie My Love
I still love the idea of this story.
It really is just so powerful. This has to be one of the more powerful chapters, considering that it's coming from her sister.
I honestly can't say anything bad about this.
Onto the next chapter~
-Jessie my l o v e
I still love the idea of this story.
It really is just so powerful. This has to be one of the more powerful chapters, considering that it's coming from her sister.
I honestly can't say anything bad about this.
Onto the next chapter~
-Jessie my l o v e