for The Knight1/4/2009 c1 
1Jessie My Love
Wow. That was written beautifully. I felt so bad for the knight. He was such a realistic character, which made it easy for me to sympathize with him.
You have very good diction and syntax, which shows you obviously know how to write. Good job. I really enjoyed this. :]
• Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
1Jessie My LoveWow. That was written beautifully. I felt so bad for the knight. He was such a realistic character, which made it easy for me to sympathize with him.
You have very good diction and syntax, which shows you obviously know how to write. Good job. I really enjoyed this. :]
• Jessie my l o v e
p.s. pay it forward
9/15/2008 c1 5the-griever
Awesome! The imagery is the too good. And the language is perfect too. Just awesome!
5the-grieverAwesome! The imagery is the too good. And the language is perfect too. Just awesome!
8/15/2008 c1 4SPARK187
This was sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. It made me feel sorry for the knight. I would have liked to see the character interacting through dialog and in a given situation. That would have added to the tension. Nice narrative though.
4SPARK187This was sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. It made me feel sorry for the knight. I would have liked to see the character interacting through dialog and in a given situation. That would have added to the tension. Nice narrative though.
8/2/2008 c1 3Mariella Hunt
This one's just brilliant... more like poetry than a story. I can't find anything constructive to say about it myself. *sob* I like that knight... this should be a longer story, seperately... it's one of the charries that it's easy to become a big fan of.
3Mariella HuntThis one's just brilliant... more like poetry than a story. I can't find anything constructive to say about it myself. *sob* I like that knight... this should be a longer story, seperately... it's one of the charries that it's easy to become a big fan of.
7/24/2008 c1 25destinee's notebook
This was short, but sweetly so, and the imagery was done quite well. I applaud you on a piece well-written.
25destinee's notebookThis was short, but sweetly so, and the imagery was done quite well. I applaud you on a piece well-written.
7/21/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Well written piece. It was sad, but the description was fantastic. Nice work. *adds to C2*
Thanks for your review of "Places I Thought I Would Never Go". I really appreciate it.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrWell written piece. It was sad, but the description was fantastic. Nice work. *adds to C2*
Thanks for your review of "Places I Thought I Would Never Go". I really appreciate it.
~Twilight Starr~
6/19/2008 c1 24fairies and snapple
That's so incredibly sad. Very well written, though. I like how you leave things open-ended, like the prince and, actually, the princess. Cool!
24fairies and snappleThat's so incredibly sad. Very well written, though. I like how you leave things open-ended, like the prince and, actually, the princess. Cool!
6/15/2008 c1 7monkeybar ohmaniac
Oh!
So sweet, but so sad. I absolutely loved it; it was beautiful. It definitely brightened up my day!
Bravo!
~Jenni
7monkeybar ohmaniacOh!
So sweet, but so sad. I absolutely loved it; it was beautiful. It definitely brightened up my day!
Bravo!
~Jenni