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8/25/2008 c10 1Jevanminx
Just aw, those two are just too cute with there banter between them.

JM
8/11/2008 c9 Jevanminx
Aw Ellie and Andrew so sweet. Those other boys were arseholes werent they.

JM
8/4/2008 c8 41AbbeyEileen
Christian is so cute! Okay, and so Chris: same guy? Not too clear.
8/4/2008 c8 1love-at-first-fight
This is fantastic. You really seem to get into the characters. Good job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
8/4/2008 c8 2Lady of Confusion
UPDATE SOON!
8/4/2008 c1 earlkgm
I like it so far. :)
8/4/2008 c8 1Nerdette
Good stuff.
8/4/2008 c8 1Jevanminx
Hahahahaha, love it, such a brilliant entrance to Christian in this chapter. Oh Andrew had a goofy smile on his face, hehehehehe.

JM
8/4/2008 c8 on the edge of insanity
love it please update
7/30/2008 c7 41AbbeyEileen
It's no trouble to review if you like what you're reading... and I do. =)

Another good chapter. I think the scene in the locker room with mystery boy could have been a bit more... intense, against the rules, etc., but otherwise nice.

And I really like the new summary. It's cute and funny and lighthearted. I didn't realise it was the same story at first, and went, "Oh, this is a great new story!"... and then I opened it and realised it WAS a great story... one I had already started. So, good job on the hook factor, very well done.

Hmm, this surprise... I say it's her brother... he sounds dreamy. Lol
7/30/2008 c7 1Jevanminx
Hehehehe, I got special thanks, I feel so loved. Oh, who's at the door then, please update soon I wanna know.

JM
7/29/2008 c7 lizzy999
omgg u have absolutely have to write more... you are amazing =]
7/29/2008 c7 2Lady of Confusion
update soon! i bet its her brother!
7/29/2008 c7 2Miraculous.Science
is it her brother? i think its her brother. update soon!
7/21/2008 c6 1Jevanminx
Aw finally Andrew isnt being such an arse, hehehehe.

JM
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