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7/8/2009 c22 4Priscilla Shay
aw... i would've punched him..or tripped him at least lol

but kool, i like we got more into building an actual relationship between them, rather than just jumping together :)

PS
7/2/2009 c21 10Electric Rose
only one thing to say, really...

YAY!

FINALLY!

:D
6/27/2009 c21 1NaughtyKagome
21 chapters. 21 chapters to get one kiss. Actually, I'm glad. Because the 21st chapter is where I came in, and started reading. Lol, so I really didn't have to wait that long. This story was not boring in the least. You kept the 'romance' between Andrew and Ellie, but showed that this would be slow. This was...realistic, I would like to say. Anyway, I love this story, and I hope you'll update soon!
6/26/2009 c21 4slee5133
yay! andrew finally did something! awesome story! update soon.
6/26/2009 c18 slee5133
hey! i really really love your story so far. just got a bit confused with this chapter, during the game.

"My gaze locked onto the pair of people talking right outside the locker room. Whereas the rest of the team was stretching and warming up, Ellie was deep in conversation with her father. Well, it looked more like he was talking and she was listening. But all thoughts of Ellie and Mr. De Luca disappeared as I focused on the task at hand."

That kinda implies that he's seeing them while he's playing, but ellie scored the goal, so how is that possible?

ok i'll continue reading now
6/24/2009 c21 1CookieNinja
surprise endind i like it.
6/24/2009 c21 nevershoutnever
OHMYGAWD

I HATE YOU

I LOVE YOU

I HATE YOU

I LOVE YOU

I LOTE YOU UGGH GRR,

im sad now.

you had to make it stop their

AH.

i have butterfliess.

its so CUTE DAMN.

i want andrew can i have him and his i guessing amazing kissing powers and hottnes !
6/24/2009 c21 Smartass Joker
Aww! Update right this second! I can't wait!

Peace,

Joker
6/24/2009 c21 1Jevanminx
FINALLY, hehehehe, that was just too sweet.

JM
6/24/2009 c21 18ManiacalByMoonlight
...

Aw...

... ... You left me speechless...

...That was.. amazing, and so sweet. Wow. Truly wonderful chapter!
6/8/2009 c20 2Goddess of Sarcasm
gosh, ur VERY talented! u should publish this! plz post the next chapters soon! :)
6/8/2009 c20 Smartass Joker
faster updates! Your story is amazing!

Peace,

Joker
6/8/2009 c20 HerezMyCard
hey! just saw this story!

just started reading it yesteray and didn't go to bed till 1:30! so good and you have an amaizing writing style. keep updating i'm dying to know what happens!
6/7/2009 c20 18ManiacalByMoonlight
First of all, YAY, another chapter! You have no idea how much the chapter alert lifted my spirits.

Anyway, this is an awesome chapter... All of the feelings are captured perfectly.. and I loved how you ended it. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter!
6/7/2009 c20 1Casfar
Oh man, so much drama. Poor Ellie, though. Having a father like that. ): I hate how parents like that have such high expectations that they don't even consider the humanity of their children. Ugh, people learn from mistakes, you can't just pound on them for each one. Dang, her father makes me really angry, haha. And it sucks that she takes it out on Andrew, but.. she's human, and I would've done the same thing. I wonder who's going to win the little match though.
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