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6/18/2008 c1 94AK the Twilight
Rhyming in poetry is difficult. There's a balance that must be kept between rhythm and meaning and while there were some rough area, specifically in the third stanza, you did a good job with this. Your poetry feels real; there isn't much imagery but you get your point across well. There is a sense of geniuity in people, but sometimes it's difficult to find it.

As a song, this is good. I can picture it being put to music. You really did a good job with this, flaws aside. Keep up the good work.

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