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6/25/2008 c1 4nitetime-dreamer
There's a lot of emotion in this, and it comes across well. You did a good job. Keep it up.
6/25/2008 c1 17Yokotaashi
simple description of a common emotion, didn't really get much from the "crystal tears" idea...maybe play around with it more
6/19/2008 c1 brokencrystal7
i really like this poem and i cant wait for the story. :)

please come and check out my poems,

brokencrystal
6/19/2008 c1 30J.N. Lloyd
The message of this poem is compelling, for many shallow people cannot deal with the loss of perfection. I love it!

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