for Black Fox6/13/2023 c4 
1TomatoesAndPasta
Very interesting preview! I bought the book a while back for Kindle, along with some of your other works, and I definitely gotta read it now!
1TomatoesAndPastaVery interesting preview! I bought the book a while back for Kindle, along with some of your other works, and I definitely gotta read it now!
4/19/2022 c4 Anonymous
Really dirty trick to not announce upfront that this is a preview only. That would (did?) drive me to never buy it and to leave a negative review.
Really dirty trick to not announce upfront that this is a preview only. That would (did?) drive me to never buy it and to leave a negative review.
1/24/2013 c1 3Jehnyahl
I think it was a terrible shame for you to rip most of the story from here and leave only some for a preview! I understand your desire to make money from your writing, but I still think you could have left this since it had been up and finished for a while and perhaps sold new work? I speak as someone who read and loved this story on here.
3JehnyahlI think it was a terrible shame for you to rip most of the story from here and leave only some for a preview! I understand your desire to make money from your writing, but I still think you could have left this since it had been up and finished for a while and perhaps sold new work? I speak as someone who read and loved this story on here.
1/5/2012 c1 Zahra R
It's an excellent story. I like the flow. But please. PLEASE. Put breaks in when you change scenes. It's confusing to the reader if you don't.
It's an excellent story. I like the flow. But please. PLEASE. Put breaks in when you change scenes. It's confusing to the reader if you don't.
8/21/2011 c3 1Dancing Mouse
So what's the name of the book, and your name? I would like t0 read this book ^^
1Dancing MouseSo what's the name of the book, and your name? I would like t0 read this book ^^
6/24/2011 c1 3PyroTech
You should put that it's just a preview in the description. I can't buy stuff online, so I was a bit upset when I started reading this, only to find that I won't be able to finish. Putting 'Preview' in the description would have been better.
3PyroTechYou should put that it's just a preview in the description. I can't buy stuff online, so I was a bit upset when I started reading this, only to find that I won't be able to finish. Putting 'Preview' in the description would have been better.
1/17/2011 c3 Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs
Good for you, girl! However, I won't be able to buy it. Because i'm British. *cries* I live in the UK. So I won't be able to read it again! :( :(
Good for you, girl! However, I won't be able to buy it. Because i'm British. *cries* I live in the UK. So I won't be able to read it again! :( :(
12/13/2010 c3 8TinaLouise
CONGRATS! CONGRATS! CONGRATS!
*pout* yet another story I love rereading taken off the internet and yet more money I'll have to scrounge around for to be able to pay for it (and here I'm still saving up enough to get your other stories in pdf or the other format-thingy) :P
This is just awesome news, we have to celebrate *starts jumping around and dancing wildly*
*notices Cavan and Gair dancing away in the middle of the crowd - drools*
8TinaLouiseCONGRATS! CONGRATS! CONGRATS!
*pout* yet another story I love rereading taken off the internet and yet more money I'll have to scrounge around for to be able to pay for it (and here I'm still saving up enough to get your other stories in pdf or the other format-thingy) :P
This is just awesome news, we have to celebrate *starts jumping around and dancing wildly*
*notices Cavan and Gair dancing away in the middle of the crowd - drools*
11/10/2010 c5 1Ben Tramsami
Totally saw that coming. Once I realized both princes had to see the Emperor at the same time and that both princes hated each other, then it was pretty clear to me. But then again, I've read a lot of slash so I can pick up on these things. Great story so far!
1Ben TramsamiTotally saw that coming. Once I realized both princes had to see the Emperor at the same time and that both princes hated each other, then it was pretty clear to me. But then again, I've read a lot of slash so I can pick up on these things. Great story so far!
11/9/2010 c21 Mona May56
I enjoyed reading your story very much ♥
I like your characters and I was sad it was over so soon.
I enjoyed reading your story very much ♥
I like your characters and I was sad it was over so soon.
10/16/2010 c21 ToraOkami303
:3 neat... can't wait to see the real plan for children though like i said before i have several ideas *reads WAY too many mpreg. stories* though i have to say Feys... i never considered that one i'll have to add it to my mental list ^.-
~T O~
:3 neat... can't wait to see the real plan for children though like i said before i have several ideas *reads WAY too many mpreg. stories* though i have to say Feys... i never considered that one i'll have to add it to my mental list ^.-
~T O~
10/16/2010 c19 ToraOkami303
1) Gair xD sorry Cavan but Gair is epic
2) :3 is a Yaoi story and i'm a Yaoi fan girl what do you THINK my fav. scene is? The Sex duh!
3)um Sorry Elanor but when she visited the Castle she was kinda a bitch...
4)Both :3 cause i'm evil like that!
5) Uh hn... can't think of anything.
6)*has millions of ideas for the heir thing* :D *shakes head* umm i can't wait to read the sequal and will be invading your profile and bothering you if i see it is not done :3
~T O~
1) Gair xD sorry Cavan but Gair is epic
2) :3 is a Yaoi story and i'm a Yaoi fan girl what do you THINK my fav. scene is? The Sex duh!
3)um Sorry Elanor but when she visited the Castle she was kinda a bitch...
4)Both :3 cause i'm evil like that!
5) Uh hn... can't think of anything.
6)*has millions of ideas for the heir thing* :D *shakes head* umm i can't wait to read the sequal and will be invading your profile and bothering you if i see it is not done :3
~T O~
10/12/2010 c21 Wingstar102
I am way, WAY late finding this story, but I'm unbelievably happy that I did. Fantastic piece! Great plot, great characters, great smut, great and dry humor... Oh yeah, definitely reading this again in the near future. Thank you for this! Will beg and grovel for more stories from you!
Love and cherries,
Wingstar
I am way, WAY late finding this story, but I'm unbelievably happy that I did. Fantastic piece! Great plot, great characters, great smut, great and dry humor... Oh yeah, definitely reading this again in the near future. Thank you for this! Will beg and grovel for more stories from you!
Love and cherries,
Wingstar