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for Alone

6/22/2008 c1 fleur de l'est
I like the imagery, and


But me-


really creates a sense of solitude.

Great touch of hope in the end though. Kind of makes it sadder.. I don't know.

Excellent flow.

Well done!

6/22/2008 c1 62Averybarbarian
Sad yet wonderful! The feeling of being alone the empty void of pain that consumes oneself when one is left to wander alone. Brilliant I loved it! I really liked how you did the lines the fewer words make them stand out more than if you had filled an entire line with the whole thought. It was great! Keep writing =)

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