for Everlasting Rapture4/20/2021 c10 ATK
not a fan of tara and maybe she's too young at 12 for a love interest. I like it more when the story is focused on Moira.
not a fan of tara and maybe she's too young at 12 for a love interest. I like it more when the story is focused on Moira.
7/30/2017 c1 Kay
First impression, this is a bit difficult to read. Accents can be imagined, they don't need to be sounded-out in text.
First impression, this is a bit difficult to read. Accents can be imagined, they don't need to be sounded-out in text.
7/30/2017 c1 
8annajade
UPDATE: I have a simple solution to readers who are finding it difficult to read the accents and are complaining about it, ready? DON'T READ IT. The end.
8annajadeUPDATE: I have a simple solution to readers who are finding it difficult to read the accents and are complaining about it, ready? DON'T READ IT. The end.
12/27/2016 c3 Guest
I have to concentrate 10x more to understand what they're saying half the time (and I know why it's written like this, being back so far in history and all, along with the Scottish accent), but other than that I like the story.
I have to concentrate 10x more to understand what they're saying half the time (and I know why it's written like this, being back so far in history and all, along with the Scottish accent), but other than that I like the story.
2/16/2016 c20 slcjnk2008
Wonderful story. I look forward to reading Tara's and Hugh's story and any others you write. You are one of my favorite writers.
Wonderful story. I look forward to reading Tara's and Hugh's story and any others you write. You are one of my favorite writers.
2/15/2016 c13 slcjnk2008
I think you have written the adult sex scenes beautifully and with great taste. It is after all a part of the human experience. Good for you and I love this story and glad that I found it and you as its writer. I plan to read your other stories as well.
I think you have written the adult sex scenes beautifully and with great taste. It is after all a part of the human experience. Good for you and I love this story and glad that I found it and you as its writer. I plan to read your other stories as well.
7/13/2015 c21 1NightCat135
This is a really good story. You could probably publish it if you like. It is a great romance story.
1NightCat135This is a really good story. You could probably publish it if you like. It is a great romance story.
7/5/2015 c2 Guest
Damn, I really hate it when online stories conform to the trope of "I'm so skinny and no guy will ever want me". That's all ever see in books. No one ever thinks to represent us curvy girls and our insecurities about it
Damn, I really hate it when online stories conform to the trope of "I'm so skinny and no guy will ever want me". That's all ever see in books. No one ever thinks to represent us curvy girls and our insecurities about it
7/5/2015 c2 8annajade
This goes to the guest with the recent review:
I appreciate your thought, but I have to decline that I'm bashing as you say the curvy girls. I'll have to remind you that this is a Historical story and if you research it, back in the 14th century (and some generations after and before) being "skinny" and "willowy" was looked down upon. Men hated it, society hated it, fashion hated, the women aimed to be voluptuous...sound familiar? Today it's the opposite. It's not a Modern story. I keep pointing out her slimness because it pointed out to men's standards in having a well-rounded woman because it signifies good breeding and fertility. So, please. Remember. Not a MODERN story. Not singling out only SKINNY women are beautiful. In the time era, SKINNY was "ugly".
Thank you, Guest.
8annajadeThis goes to the guest with the recent review:
I appreciate your thought, but I have to decline that I'm bashing as you say the curvy girls. I'll have to remind you that this is a Historical story and if you research it, back in the 14th century (and some generations after and before) being "skinny" and "willowy" was looked down upon. Men hated it, society hated it, fashion hated, the women aimed to be voluptuous...sound familiar? Today it's the opposite. It's not a Modern story. I keep pointing out her slimness because it pointed out to men's standards in having a well-rounded woman because it signifies good breeding and fertility. So, please. Remember. Not a MODERN story. Not singling out only SKINNY women are beautiful. In the time era, SKINNY was "ugly".
Thank you, Guest.