for Lucian Boom Invisible Head Case2/27/2020 c21 Guest
*squeal* I throughly enjoyed this story. It was already great having Sebastian’s story, but it was even better with its sequel. Please keep writing! Xo
*squeal* I throughly enjoyed this story. It was already great having Sebastian’s story, but it was even better with its sequel. Please keep writing! Xo
2/19/2020 c12 Angelina
The grammar isn’t that bad, dear. Your wonderful story makes up for any mistakes 100x. Keep up the good work, this story has me all giggly. I love Seb and Madsy in their story, and I love Ezra and Lucian in theirs.
The grammar isn’t that bad, dear. Your wonderful story makes up for any mistakes 100x. Keep up the good work, this story has me all giggly. I love Seb and Madsy in their story, and I love Ezra and Lucian in theirs.
10/3/2019 c21 
1Bookworm5678
LET IT BE A DUDE! Sorry, but I think it would be so cool if Greys soulmate turned out to be a guy, that would explain why he has no luck with girls XD
This was AMAZING! Brilliant with the prophecy thing and the demon thing and the Maddy getting knocked up thing and Ezra and Lucien falling in love! GOD you're great! Please marry me x
1Bookworm5678LET IT BE A DUDE! Sorry, but I think it would be so cool if Greys soulmate turned out to be a guy, that would explain why he has no luck with girls XD
This was AMAZING! Brilliant with the prophecy thing and the demon thing and the Maddy getting knocked up thing and Ezra and Lucien falling in love! GOD you're great! Please marry me x
10/3/2019 c20 Bookworm5678
Yaaay the boned! The elders are DICKS and I hope they ge t shat on by giant pigeons! I loved this fix, but I hope Grey gets a love, too!
Yaaay the boned! The elders are DICKS and I hope they ge t shat on by giant pigeons! I loved this fix, but I hope Grey gets a love, too!
10/3/2019 c19 Bookworm5678
Noooo you bastards! Oh poor baby Lucy! Poor Ezra! If this has a sad ending I will NEVER FORGIVE YOU!
On another note, lowlands weather sounds a lot like British weather. Seriously, when its not raining constantly the suns trying to burn us alive, and when it snows its like it's trying to kill us all. British\Lowland weather SUCKS!
Noooo you bastards! Oh poor baby Lucy! Poor Ezra! If this has a sad ending I will NEVER FORGIVE YOU!
On another note, lowlands weather sounds a lot like British weather. Seriously, when its not raining constantly the suns trying to burn us alive, and when it snows its like it's trying to kill us all. British\Lowland weather SUCKS!
10/2/2019 c8 Bookworm5678
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD WILL YOU TWO IDIOTS JUST BANG? God, sexual tension is frustrating...
Oh, so now there's a prophecy? Intriguing...
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD WILL YOU TWO IDIOTS JUST BANG? God, sexual tension is frustrating...
Oh, so now there's a prophecy? Intriguing...
10/1/2019 c1 Bookworm5678
I smell romance! Clearly our Lucien is already head over heels for the lovely Ezra, lol. I'm so happy you did a sequel, I can't wait to see what happens!
I smell romance! Clearly our Lucien is already head over heels for the lovely Ezra, lol. I'm so happy you did a sequel, I can't wait to see what happens!
7/5/2018 c21 Plsplspls
Honestly cannot believe how much I love these stories please keep going I hope you write another togo with this world I love it somuch way more than i was expecting ive been reading your stuff this past week and just cannot stop hahah I really hope youll be able to continue moon child as well tho good luck awesome stuff!
Honestly cannot believe how much I love these stories please keep going I hope you write another togo with this world I love it somuch way more than i was expecting ive been reading your stuff this past week and just cannot stop hahah I really hope youll be able to continue moon child as well tho good luck awesome stuff!
4/19/2018 c17 mollyyringwormm
Ohh my godddd! I have been binge-reading this series all night and l just can't tear myself away. I have to say, this is probably my favorite chapter of yours that i've read in the whole series. I'm sure that I have a few others but this one stood out to me the most so far. I'm definitely a fan!
Ohh my godddd! I have been binge-reading this series all night and l just can't tear myself away. I have to say, this is probably my favorite chapter of yours that i've read in the whole series. I'm sure that I have a few others but this one stood out to me the most so far. I'm definitely a fan!
10/28/2017 c21 REGRETABLE
I read your story about Sebastian and Madsy first and LOVED IT, but I gotta say, I DO love a good bad boy with a dark past falls inlove with a sweet, strong and optomistic girl romance!
I preferred this one, but simply because of the character personalities. I love how much detail and care you put into these. The overall plot was excellent, the dialogue was wonderful (typically, it's hard to find a story on here with both - most stories lack on one of those fronts).
I really appreciated the way you let the character's relationship build. All too often an authorhas them fall inlove way too early. The build up and hiccups along the way make it so worth it.
I really enjoyed this, thank you!
I read your story about Sebastian and Madsy first and LOVED IT, but I gotta say, I DO love a good bad boy with a dark past falls inlove with a sweet, strong and optomistic girl romance!
I preferred this one, but simply because of the character personalities. I love how much detail and care you put into these. The overall plot was excellent, the dialogue was wonderful (typically, it's hard to find a story on here with both - most stories lack on one of those fronts).
I really appreciated the way you let the character's relationship build. All too often an authorhas them fall inlove way too early. The build up and hiccups along the way make it so worth it.
I really enjoyed this, thank you!
4/12/2016 c21 mgaa
oh pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeee...enough with the suspense...what happened to Gray? where did the sprites take him? what about the secret villages where Lucian's brother Tarrin is? are they going to be found out? will magic return to them? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN? TELL MEEE...US! PLEASE!
oh by the way congratulations for this...I really really enjoyed it.. thank you
oh pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeee...enough with the suspense...what happened to Gray? where did the sprites take him? what about the secret villages where Lucian's brother Tarrin is? are they going to be found out? will magic return to them? WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN? TELL MEEE...US! PLEASE!
oh by the way congratulations for this...I really really enjoyed it.. thank you
11/15/2015 c21 Guest
Like the one before it, I loved it!
Like the one before it, I loved it!
11/15/2015 c12 Guest
Just finished chapter 12 and this GreenBoom couple is awesome. I was sad that Seb and Madsy's story ended but there is definitely room here for Lucian and Ezra! I really love reading about this hate/secrete love foreplay before actually admitting defeat of attractions. The story is great so far, can't wait for the action, the mystery behind Lucian Boom and -wink-, to happen!
Just finished chapter 12 and this GreenBoom couple is awesome. I was sad that Seb and Madsy's story ended but there is definitely room here for Lucian and Ezra! I really love reading about this hate/secrete love foreplay before actually admitting defeat of attractions. The story is great so far, can't wait for the action, the mystery behind Lucian Boom and -wink-, to happen!
1/18/2015 c21 Guest
This story was great! I thought the relationships were adorable! (and your grammar's not toooooo terrible)
This story was great! I thought the relationships were adorable! (and your grammar's not toooooo terrible)
9/18/2014 c1 2Chiisutofupuru
Make room for Lucian... well, I might.
Ez seems like a good first person so far I think. I'll come back when I need to read another romance/fantasy :P
Chiisu
2ChiisutofupuruMake room for Lucian... well, I might.
Ez seems like a good first person so far I think. I'll come back when I need to read another romance/fantasy :P
Chiisu