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1Anime-Bearsy
Love this story.
So funny, made me laugh a lot. Would love to draw some character designs (If you'll let me), and the only thing I'd change is some of the spellings/grammar.
Overall it was epic :)
1Anime-BearsyLove this story.
So funny, made me laugh a lot. Would love to draw some character designs (If you'll let me), and the only thing I'd change is some of the spellings/grammar.
Overall it was epic :)
6/27/2014 c2 3PerfectKarotTop
I enjoyed the first 2 chapters and I will definitely continue reading. :)
3PerfectKarotTopI enjoyed the first 2 chapters and I will definitely continue reading. :)
8/23/2008 c14 6Ms. Critic
So I feel like reviewing again after reading the other reviews. First of all, I lolal during this story. Also, I'm not aware of any stories in which the humor is entirely based on jokes. I mean, no one stops in the middle of the chapter and goes "Knock knock." It just doesn't work like that. And the Peanut Butter thing? It was totally crucial to the plot! David's repeated dreams about peanut butter symbolized his growing confidence and coming into terms with his own ability to take charge of the situation and create a happy outcome. In his final dream he faced his ultimate fear, but could not overcome them entirely. Which only means he has room to grow in the next book!
Yours Truly,
Ms. Critic
6Ms. CriticSo I feel like reviewing again after reading the other reviews. First of all, I lolal during this story. Also, I'm not aware of any stories in which the humor is entirely based on jokes. I mean, no one stops in the middle of the chapter and goes "Knock knock." It just doesn't work like that. And the Peanut Butter thing? It was totally crucial to the plot! David's repeated dreams about peanut butter symbolized his growing confidence and coming into terms with his own ability to take charge of the situation and create a happy outcome. In his final dream he faced his ultimate fear, but could not overcome them entirely. Which only means he has room to grow in the next book!
Yours Truly,
Ms. Critic
8/23/2008 c16 Ms. Critic
I refuse to say how much I loved this story. I am very upset. David and Madison never got their movie date. I will never read another story by this author ever again. Also, soldier is spelled with an I. An I! soldIer. SOLDIER! Not solder. GET IT RIGHT!
I refuse to say how much I loved this story. I am very upset. David and Madison never got their movie date. I will never read another story by this author ever again. Also, soldier is spelled with an I. An I! soldIer. SOLDIER! Not solder. GET IT RIGHT!
7/9/2008 c2 11000 Dimes
Sorry, not a review, but...
@ Bob Evans: Ha, you're probably right. I need to watch less British comedies.
Now that I reread this story, though, I think it sounds alot like a cartoon episode. It would be funnier as a cartoon, fo' sho'.
11000 DimesSorry, not a review, but...
@ Bob Evans: Ha, you're probably right. I need to watch less British comedies.
Now that I reread this story, though, I think it sounds alot like a cartoon episode. It would be funnier as a cartoon, fo' sho'.
7/9/2008 c16 71Bob Evans
Okay, so I was expecting some kind of horrible cliff hanger ending that would only be resolved by the next story. But you successfully resolved this plot, while leaving room open for more adventure. UNLIKE Wreath 2, where it ended with the Master Captain racing back to Marva, and Commander Sandra and the Mediator still on Wreath trying to stop the Promise Alliance from taking over the universe!
Still, the whole Peanut Butter thing makes no sense. I mean, I guess if it was some kind of huge subplot in the whole saga, but I'm pretty sure the magical stone had nothing to do with it, so I don't know what the point of this story was except for introducing the characters and concepts for the later stories. So...you better write more! Or else!
~Bob Evans
P.S. Fudge on 10 Dimes. Apparently the humor in here was too silly for his tastes. Maybe he should go find some more "tasteful" humor.
71Bob EvansOkay, so I was expecting some kind of horrible cliff hanger ending that would only be resolved by the next story. But you successfully resolved this plot, while leaving room open for more adventure. UNLIKE Wreath 2, where it ended with the Master Captain racing back to Marva, and Commander Sandra and the Mediator still on Wreath trying to stop the Promise Alliance from taking over the universe!
Still, the whole Peanut Butter thing makes no sense. I mean, I guess if it was some kind of huge subplot in the whole saga, but I'm pretty sure the magical stone had nothing to do with it, so I don't know what the point of this story was except for introducing the characters and concepts for the later stories. So...you better write more! Or else!
~Bob Evans
P.S. Fudge on 10 Dimes. Apparently the humor in here was too silly for his tastes. Maybe he should go find some more "tasteful" humor.
7/9/2008 c16 dinodaw
well well it's over or is it? i don't know... and that was the only part with the peanut butter 8p anywho good story.
keep up the good work!
well well it's over or is it? i don't know... and that was the only part with the peanut butter 8p anywho good story.
keep up the good work!
7/9/2008 c16 Seykhl
I completely loved it. A lot. Continue, please! That was so funny. Thanks for writing it!
-T.I.N.
I completely loved it. A lot. Continue, please! That was so funny. Thanks for writing it!
-T.I.N.
7/9/2008 c16 8Rayder99
I loved it! You should make a 2nd one. For anyone who see this should take a look at my storys.
8Rayder99I loved it! You should make a 2nd one. For anyone who see this should take a look at my storys.
7/8/2008 c1 11000 Dimes
Honestly... It wasn't very good.
Pretty much all of the humor was based off of words like 'Nachos' and dumb conversations. It was like reading a grocery list.
Also, there are no actual jokes in it. If you find commercial references and thinking flip-flops funny, I can understand that, but most intelligent people don't.
11000 DimesHonestly... It wasn't very good.
Pretty much all of the humor was based off of words like 'Nachos' and dumb conversations. It was like reading a grocery list.
Also, there are no actual jokes in it. If you find commercial references and thinking flip-flops funny, I can understand that, but most intelligent people don't.
7/8/2008 c15 dinodaw
Is that it? is there more? when dose the peanut butter come into play? I WANT TO KNOW!
Is that it? is there more? when dose the peanut butter come into play? I WANT TO KNOW!
7/7/2008 c14 Seykhl
Hilarious. I like the whole "this hasn't been invented stuff" and the "if this becomes a movie" and pretty much everything. Great!
-T.I.N.
Hilarious. I like the whole "this hasn't been invented stuff" and the "if this becomes a movie" and pretty much everything. Great!
-T.I.N.
7/7/2008 c14 dinodaw
heh dufartt things he is fat, and a big werid mountain what next will you think of...
Keep up the good work
heh dufartt things he is fat, and a big werid mountain what next will you think of...
Keep up the good work