for Brothers of Thunder9/10/2010 c1 Jada Writes
Sounds like a great story so far, one that could use more reviews. I look forward to reading the rest!
- J
Sounds like a great story so far, one that could use more reviews. I look forward to reading the rest!
- J
1/10/2010 c22 SJ
wow...this is an incredible story. i luved it all,couldnt stop reading it at times. it made my heart ach, n feel all fluttery at parts lol. n i almost cried when john 'died' n then when he came back. fabulous story! luv it all i cant wait to read the sequal.
wow...this is an incredible story. i luved it all,couldnt stop reading it at times. it made my heart ach, n feel all fluttery at parts lol. n i almost cried when john 'died' n then when he came back. fabulous story! luv it all i cant wait to read the sequal.
1/6/2010 c1 
7Writing Reality
Love it so far :)
Really cool how he kind of has two personalities, himself and then his inner self.
Love how they're arguing.
-x-
Padmai -Hidden Assassin-
7Writing RealityLove it so far :)
Really cool how he kind of has two personalities, himself and then his inner self.
Love how they're arguing.
-x-
Padmai -Hidden Assassin-
5/31/2009 c21 jillian
its so hard trying to find a really good story on fictionpress. this was such a breath of fresh air, and I hope the sequel is even better.
kudos
its so hard trying to find a really good story on fictionpress. this was such a breath of fresh air, and I hope the sequel is even better.
kudos
10/11/2008 c21 eva123
Hi, i really liked your story. I loved the way you described the characters in the book, not too much and not too little. I can't wait to start on the sequel.
Hi, i really liked your story. I loved the way you described the characters in the book, not too much and not too little. I can't wait to start on the sequel.
9/13/2008 c23 2crecentmoon89
gr start/finish fade to gray! it took me several days to finish reading this story because i dont have internet at my house right now and it drove me insane!
2crecentmoon89gr start/finish fade to gray! it took me several days to finish reading this story because i dont have internet at my house right now and it drove me insane!
8/21/2008 c23 way2lazy2signin
Guardian Devil Most def. this story was fantasic! It was the perfect blend of everything. Real characters, hurt, love, hate, death, life, and all in all a great plot line! great job!
Guardian Devil Most def. this story was fantasic! It was the perfect blend of everything. Real characters, hurt, love, hate, death, life, and all in all a great plot line! great job!
8/20/2008 c21 3Westley
This is a really fantastic story you've written here! That characters, are way deeper then I would have thought! I love the way you’ve perfectly described everyone down to their very core.
I’ve spent hours reading this, and yup, I laughed, I cried (not really, but got teary-eyed!), I yelled at the computer screen, and all that. I had to let out a big “aw” at the ending too.
I would say the best quality about this story is your characters. They run deep.
As for a sequel title, I like Shades of Gray the best.
3WestleyThis is a really fantastic story you've written here! That characters, are way deeper then I would have thought! I love the way you’ve perfectly described everyone down to their very core.
I’ve spent hours reading this, and yup, I laughed, I cried (not really, but got teary-eyed!), I yelled at the computer screen, and all that. I had to let out a big “aw” at the ending too.
I would say the best quality about this story is your characters. They run deep.
As for a sequel title, I like Shades of Gray the best.
8/20/2008 c23 Cheese
Hmm... It is very difficult to pick a title one likes when the story is in the creation stages. But, with the information provided about Paul in both the story and in the author's notes, many of the titles didn't fit, while a handful did. I definitely see a 'Gray-themed' title working with him and his story, as he always said that he and John were in "The Gray Area".
My picks are as follow, though 2 and 3 are a close toss-up for me:
1. The Gray Area
2. Shades of Gray
3. Man Between the Lines
So, for me, "The Gray Area" works the best and just...suits him. Again, it depends on what the story is like, but if it's about the on-going conflict with the agency, then seeing him in that 'Gray Area' makes the most sense, to me. :)
Hopefully that helps somewhat. Looking forward to whatever you decide to go with! ^^
Hmm... It is very difficult to pick a title one likes when the story is in the creation stages. But, with the information provided about Paul in both the story and in the author's notes, many of the titles didn't fit, while a handful did. I definitely see a 'Gray-themed' title working with him and his story, as he always said that he and John were in "The Gray Area".
My picks are as follow, though 2 and 3 are a close toss-up for me:
1. The Gray Area
2. Shades of Gray
3. Man Between the Lines
So, for me, "The Gray Area" works the best and just...suits him. Again, it depends on what the story is like, but if it's about the on-going conflict with the agency, then seeing him in that 'Gray Area' makes the most sense, to me. :)
Hopefully that helps somewhat. Looking forward to whatever you decide to go with! ^^
8/20/2008 c23 AMM3485
An anatomy of gray, in the shadows and Guardian Devil.
Can I just say yay sequel! YAY! lol.
An anatomy of gray, in the shadows and Guardian Devil.
Can I just say yay sequel! YAY! lol.
8/20/2008 c23 Strangely Natural
*The Shadow, The Mind, The Man
*Saul (this one really fits his character: reformed sinner, and sticks to the tradition of biblical references)
*Crooked He Did Fly
These are my picks, hope they are of use to you ^_^
*The Shadow, The Mind, The Man
*Saul (this one really fits his character: reformed sinner, and sticks to the tradition of biblical references)
*Crooked He Did Fly
These are my picks, hope they are of use to you ^_^
8/20/2008 c23 YankeeDandy
I've loved your story! Can't wait to see what will be in your Paul-focused sequel.
My top three titles...
Guardian Devil (It's an interesting contradiction)
Truth in Other Words
Otherside
I've loved your story! Can't wait to see what will be in your Paul-focused sequel.
My top three titles...
Guardian Devil (It's an interesting contradiction)
Truth in Other Words
Otherside
8/19/2008 c23 gallowsCalibrator
Well I like these three:
Dressed to Kill
In the Shadows
and Guardian Devil
Well those are the ones that I think are cool but I don't know its your story...
Well I like these three:
Dressed to Kill
In the Shadows
and Guardian Devil
Well those are the ones that I think are cool but I don't know its your story...
8/19/2008 c23 Ginevra-lily
hard to choose not knowing much about the story but I like these three:
Dressed to Kill
Truth in Other Words
Crooked He Did Fly
hard to choose not knowing much about the story but I like these three:
Dressed to Kill
Truth in Other Words
Crooked He Did Fly