for Unrequited Love10/8/2003 c1 
9happy-fetus
bravo, it's real nice, wei. wish that fate'd listen when you tell it to be kind to you. pity it usually DOESN'T happen. damnit.
9happy-fetusbravo, it's real nice, wei. wish that fate'd listen when you tell it to be kind to you. pity it usually DOESN'T happen. damnit.
5/22/2003 c1 Hele
This is slightly confusing...you're very optimistic (in comparison) about a very depressing subject. It's very wordy, which sometimes isn't a good thing. In poetry, the key is often to be simple. But I can understand your sentiment.
This is slightly confusing...you're very optimistic (in comparison) about a very depressing subject. It's very wordy, which sometimes isn't a good thing. In poetry, the key is often to be simple. But I can understand your sentiment.