8/4/2009 c1 97rust phoenix
Haha, very nice. I love the way you ended it. I like receiving constructive criticism, but I get what you're saying about people who leave needlessly critical reviews that are just based on saying their own opinions are the only ones allowed. Great job with the rhyme, rhythm and tone! Keep writing!
Haha, very nice. I love the way you ended it. I like receiving constructive criticism, but I get what you're saying about people who leave needlessly critical reviews that are just based on saying their own opinions are the only ones allowed. Great job with the rhyme, rhythm and tone! Keep writing!
7/27/2008 c1 2Mandatory Volunteer
AHA! That is HILARIOUS.
It definitely made my day. I was having a bad one before, but you made it better. XD
AHA! That is HILARIOUS.
It definitely made my day. I was having a bad one before, but you made it better. XD