for Shorts6/28/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I think you should make this a story of shorts & put each one as it's own chapter because after the first there they dont really connect. I did like them all though, they were funny & really relateable. The only thing is, I'm sure your breaks in the last piece were on purpose, but I didn't really are for them.
612simpleplan13I think you should make this a story of shorts & put each one as it's own chapter because after the first there they dont really connect. I did like them all though, they were funny & really relateable. The only thing is, I'm sure your breaks in the last piece were on purpose, but I didn't really are for them.