for The Horizon6/29/2008 c1 sylvia's syndrome
i think i would like this even better without that last line. "no one can touch the sky" would be such a strong line to end with. the last line seems out of place, the only place with first person address, such a different tone than everything else...
i think i would like this even better without that last line. "no one can touch the sky" would be such a strong line to end with. the last line seems out of place, the only place with first person address, such a different tone than everything else...