1/8/2010 c1 8sealednectar
I really like the rhythm of this poem and I can feel the anger. Very powerful.
I really like the rhythm of this poem and I can feel the anger. Very powerful.
7/13/2008 c1 102Charmingly Temporary
Ha ha the ending made me laugh. :) Angry poems are always interesting to read, and I truly felt the anger all the way through the poem. It flowed nicely, and my favorite line was "So go sell your soul, it's not like you'll need it". Good work!
Ha ha the ending made me laugh. :) Angry poems are always interesting to read, and I truly felt the anger all the way through the poem. It flowed nicely, and my favorite line was "So go sell your soul, it's not like you'll need it". Good work!