
5/14/2016 c1
2the trash lord
...you took the rest of the story down? i suppose you have your reasons and while i really would love to read this again, i do appreciate that i did get to read it and enjoy it fully a few years ago. it was expertly written, as far as i can remember. i wish you all the best.

...you took the rest of the story down? i suppose you have your reasons and while i really would love to read this again, i do appreciate that i did get to read it and enjoy it fully a few years ago. it was expertly written, as far as i can remember. i wish you all the best.
5/26/2015 c1 beachgal2002
I have always loved this story along with your other one but what happened to it? It just disappeared... :(
I have always loved this story along with your other one but what happened to it? It just disappeared... :(
11/25/2014 c24
6Dark-Automaton
This story is really good! The characters are lovable, yet flawed like actual people. As for new story ideas, I have a few that I can't seem to implement on my own, if you're willing to PM me.

This story is really good! The characters are lovable, yet flawed like actual people. As for new story ideas, I have a few that I can't seem to implement on my own, if you're willing to PM me.
11/6/2013 c1 Guest
I know your question about a possible sequel was about mmm ... 4 years ago? But I loved Reilley and I wanted to know his love story. Also the sneak peek at the Queen's peculiar personality was amazing. Maybe you could do a love story between them? Reilley x the Queen!
Best wishes and keep writing.
I know your question about a possible sequel was about mmm ... 4 years ago? But I loved Reilley and I wanted to know his love story. Also the sneak peek at the Queen's peculiar personality was amazing. Maybe you could do a love story between them? Reilley x the Queen!
Best wishes and keep writing.
9/1/2013 c24
9Cookie Seller On The Dark Side
Wowza, that was the best fiction press story I have ever read!
THAT WAS AMAZING!
Well done with it.
-Cookie Seller.

Wowza, that was the best fiction press story I have ever read!
THAT WAS AMAZING!
Well done with it.
-Cookie Seller.
2/14/2013 c24
19Alaeryel
Well-I had half expected you to have Melinda make Luke to work for her forgiveness like majority of the stories I have read BUT here again I have to say 'THIS IS A VERY VERY UNIQUE' STORY! I absolutely adored it and I am hoping for alot more from you! Either the continuation of 'Forever Looking' or another Vampire or Werewolf one-just anything-your writing is out and out FANTABULOUS! Yes I know that isn't a real word but one works for me regarding your writing and your stories!

Well-I had half expected you to have Melinda make Luke to work for her forgiveness like majority of the stories I have read BUT here again I have to say 'THIS IS A VERY VERY UNIQUE' STORY! I absolutely adored it and I am hoping for alot more from you! Either the continuation of 'Forever Looking' or another Vampire or Werewolf one-just anything-your writing is out and out FANTABULOUS! Yes I know that isn't a real word but one works for me regarding your writing and your stories!
2/14/2013 c21 Alaeryel
AGAIN YOU THREW ME FOR A LOOP! I never would have thought of Luke being a jerk EVEN if he had ended up falling in love with her-HE IS STILL A JERK! Now a part of me would rather see her with Reilly but I will definitely hold my opinion until I see how you have Luke making it up to her.
AGAIN YOU THREW ME FOR A LOOP! I never would have thought of Luke being a jerk EVEN if he had ended up falling in love with her-HE IS STILL A JERK! Now a part of me would rather see her with Reilly but I will definitely hold my opinion until I see how you have Luke making it up to her.
2/14/2013 c20 Alaeryel
YOU ARE JUST PLAIN EVIL HERE Cirya-but I really love evil! Now we have another quandary going and like they and you have said 'curiosity killed the cat' and I say 'suspense is killing this cat'-LOL! You are beyond amazing!
YOU ARE JUST PLAIN EVIL HERE Cirya-but I really love evil! Now we have another quandary going and like they and you have said 'curiosity killed the cat' and I say 'suspense is killing this cat'-LOL! You are beyond amazing!
2/14/2013 c19 Alaeryel
Dower? You never said Braden's last name that I remember. Why would they want him? Oh she hasn't had a great day you are right-poor girl. I cannot imagine how Darcy and Adriana are going to feel now that she is missing and after everything else that happened. You have a knack at instigating ALOT of EMOTIONS into this story and I ALWAYS CRAVE THEM-ASTOUNDING!
Dower? You never said Braden's last name that I remember. Why would they want him? Oh she hasn't had a great day you are right-poor girl. I cannot imagine how Darcy and Adriana are going to feel now that she is missing and after everything else that happened. You have a knack at instigating ALOT of EMOTIONS into this story and I ALWAYS CRAVE THEM-ASTOUNDING!
2/14/2013 c17 Alaeryel
Well now I am feeling a bit of an ass here but I am also confused. What is up with Sardis? I also get the feeling that Melinda may not actually be her parents child or the twins sibling but that is just my take on it and am probably wrong. A part of me feels maybe Sardis is her father and for some unknown reason she is kept a secret-what a tangled web you have wove here!
Well now I am feeling a bit of an ass here but I am also confused. What is up with Sardis? I also get the feeling that Melinda may not actually be her parents child or the twins sibling but that is just my take on it and am probably wrong. A part of me feels maybe Sardis is her father and for some unknown reason she is kept a secret-what a tangled web you have wove here!
2/14/2013 c16 Alaeryel
DAMN IT Cirya-Sardis of all people I thought would understand this. I even had the impression that he might welcome a sort of truce it might offer and new take on this matter when he spoke to her about letting her figure it out-I DID NOT EXPECT THIS! Yes I like Reilly and I think they make WONDERFUL friends but I really really like Luke and Melinda as a couple. Now with this development, I cannot wait to see how you have it played out!
DAMN IT Cirya-Sardis of all people I thought would understand this. I even had the impression that he might welcome a sort of truce it might offer and new take on this matter when he spoke to her about letting her figure it out-I DID NOT EXPECT THIS! Yes I like Reilly and I think they make WONDERFUL friends but I really really like Luke and Melinda as a couple. Now with this development, I cannot wait to see how you have it played out!
2/14/2013 c15 Alaeryel
I COULDN'T help but grin through this whole chapter-IT WAS PERFECTION PERSONIFIED!
I COULDN'T help but grin through this whole chapter-IT WAS PERFECTION PERSONIFIED!