for Hindsight7/1/2008 c1 
12UnderhandedCruelty
That was truly amazing. I'm honestly a bit speechless. I love the characters and the idea behind it all. The ending leaves you with questions too. You should write more horror stories.
12UnderhandedCrueltyThat was truly amazing. I'm honestly a bit speechless. I love the characters and the idea behind it all. The ending leaves you with questions too. You should write more horror stories.
6/30/2008 c1 10Koki Enwai
Wow. I'm speechless. You should let your muse call you to this genre more often! You're a pro at it!
As far as constructive criticism goes, I'm not sure I can offer any. I actually just read this for its pure enjoyment factor. Nicely done.
- Koki
10Koki EnwaiWow. I'm speechless. You should let your muse call you to this genre more often! You're a pro at it!
As far as constructive criticism goes, I'm not sure I can offer any. I actually just read this for its pure enjoyment factor. Nicely done.
- Koki