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8/4/2013 c3 AleynaP
Really have been enjoying reading your work, I'm not particularly good at editing, but I have to point out towards the beginning of your chapter Allyia says,

"..There's just too much going threw my head."

Threw should be changed to through

hate to be amongst the grammar nazis, but it's something I would want to know about my own work (if I had any)

Looking forward to reading more of your other stories!
3/31/2013 c4 Shadow Kissed Twilight
Ugh, this one is good too! Please update it when you can.

Shadow Kissed
7/20/2011 c4 Greecian
yayy! I want to read more, now! please update soon, i love when my favorite stories are updated frequently, and this is my new favorite! love the story line please please please put up the next chapter soon!

7/5/2011 c4 1OneChance
This is an interesting story, and I am very disappointed that it appears you will not continue it, based on the time since your last update. If you do decide to continue, I will gladly read more.
6/17/2011 c4 pille-ip
Interesting. Update soon!
12/10/2010 c4 1Charlee Rayne
and. you. stop. THERE?
7/14/2010 c4 Crankygal
This story is simply refreshing and interesting, it sparks my interest n you should most definitely continue it. Update more often please, for the sake of my sanity. Gosh i'm wondering where e kiss will lead to.
3/28/2010 c4 3Im Just Mlssundaztood
Love the story. So escorts are for sex? Ha, that's cool. I would assume it's for a girl to stay pure til marriage but I like this idea better. Why is is okay for the guy to have as much sex as he wants but it's a scandal for a women to do so...

Love the story. Please update soon.

Im Just Mlssundaztood
1/24/2010 c4 7MuseofMagic
I feel like the story is a little rushed and jumps around rather rapidly. It can get a bit confusing, but the overall plot seems interesting enough and I look forward to reading more and seeing where you take it. I do suggest though maybe trying to describe events and especially Allyia's feelings and thoughts in a bit more detail, but even if you choose not to, I think it'll still be a fairly interesting read, so please, continue soon!
7/17/2009 c4 Topez
Pls continue writing. I love the story. n the last chp was interesting. :) haha...
7/9/2009 c4 MarloCarlo10
Good chapter!

I would've never guessed that was what escorts were for XDD
7/9/2009 c3 MarloCarlo10
Hm something's off with the prince! I wouldn't have guessed!

That's awesome that she sneaks off on her adventures!
7/8/2009 c4 aflores90
This is a pretty good story. I'd like to see where it goes :).
7/7/2009 c1 MarloCarlo10
Aww poor Hayden...
7/3/2009 c3 Topez
Hi. Love your story. Pls continue writing. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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