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26Melladonna
Wonderful cliffhanger! I certainly hope that you update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens to Daisestu!
26MelladonnaWonderful cliffhanger! I certainly hope that you update soon! I can't wait to find out what happens to Daisestu!
2/14/2010 c29 Melladonna
Interesting chapter. It will be interesting to see the demon aid Maya instead of beating her up. I also liked the fight scene between Maya and the demons. It was very heat-filled and beautifully written. Great job.
Interesting chapter. It will be interesting to see the demon aid Maya instead of beating her up. I also liked the fight scene between Maya and the demons. It was very heat-filled and beautifully written. Great job.
2/14/2010 c28 Melladonna
Interesting chapter. I liked your reoccurring theme of why? Why not... throughout.
Interesting chapter. I liked your reoccurring theme of why? Why not... throughout.
2/14/2010 c27 Melladonna
I wonder what will happen to Yoshikuni and Daisetsu now that they went in for a little ass-kicking? Great chapter! I enjoyed it.
I wonder what will happen to Yoshikuni and Daisetsu now that they went in for a little ass-kicking? Great chapter! I enjoyed it.
2/14/2010 c26 Melladonna
Funny, I'm reading this chapter on Valentine's Day when it mentions Valentine's Day. XD I find that ironic. Great chapter nonetheless. I really enjoy reading this story and I hope to be caught up on chapters by the end of today.
Funny, I'm reading this chapter on Valentine's Day when it mentions Valentine's Day. XD I find that ironic. Great chapter nonetheless. I really enjoy reading this story and I hope to be caught up on chapters by the end of today.
2/14/2010 c25 Melladonna
Things are getting interesting in this chapter. I like how they are finally pulling together and now his mother is pulled into the whole mess. It makes it even more interesting. I hope that Maya will be alright.
Things are getting interesting in this chapter. I like how they are finally pulling together and now his mother is pulled into the whole mess. It makes it even more interesting. I hope that Maya will be alright.
2/14/2010 c24 Melladonna
Beautiful chapter, and I like the concept of angels taking pain upon themselves. I actually think the same thing and the idea flows heavily in my story, Sacrifice.
Great job once more. I will read the next chapter now.
Beautiful chapter, and I like the concept of angels taking pain upon themselves. I actually think the same thing and the idea flows heavily in my story, Sacrifice.
Great job once more. I will read the next chapter now.
2/14/2010 c23 Melladonna
This was a very good chapter. I can tell that both of your writing styles have improved greatly. You both have gotten a lot more descriptive and really managed to make your characters come to life. I could really feel the emotion in this chapter. ery impressive indeed.
This was a very good chapter. I can tell that both of your writing styles have improved greatly. You both have gotten a lot more descriptive and really managed to make your characters come to life. I could really feel the emotion in this chapter. ery impressive indeed.
2/14/2010 c30 Hidden Flowers
Update? I loved the last chapter. It was incredible. I was looking over some of your older work, and the change is drastic. Even at the beginning of this story, your style lacked the polish it has in this chapter.
Update? I loved the last chapter. It was incredible. I was looking over some of your older work, and the change is drastic. Even at the beginning of this story, your style lacked the polish it has in this chapter.
1/31/2010 c22 Melladonna
Another great chapter! I'm glad that Daisetsu is remaining so faithful to Maya..
Another great chapter! I'm glad that Daisetsu is remaining so faithful to Maya..
1/31/2010 c21 Melladonna
This was an interesting chapter. I wonder what's going to happen with Daisetsu now that his demonic side has been unleashed.
This was an interesting chapter. I wonder what's going to happen with Daisetsu now that his demonic side has been unleashed.
1/31/2010 c20 Melladonna
Now I'm wondering who exactly Yuji is. Apparently, he knows something about Maya. I also wonder what happened even though I have a slight idea of what I want to confirm my suspicions. Now I'm off the read the next chapter
Now I'm wondering who exactly Yuji is. Apparently, he knows something about Maya. I also wonder what happened even though I have a slight idea of what I want to confirm my suspicions. Now I'm off the read the next chapter
1/31/2010 c19 Melladonna
Another beautiful chapter. I really like the last line of Daisetsu's. It was a really sweet ending to this chapter and I like the reference between the play and their real life situation.
Another beautiful chapter. I really like the last line of Daisetsu's. It was a really sweet ending to this chapter and I like the reference between the play and their real life situation.
1/31/2010 c18 Melladonna
Poor Daisetsu, he has to be angry knowing that Yuji has the male lead and he'll be in the play with Maya. This is certainly getting interesting. I wonder how Daisetsu will take all of this.
Poor Daisetsu, he has to be angry knowing that Yuji has the male lead and he'll be in the play with Maya. This is certainly getting interesting. I wonder how Daisetsu will take all of this.