for Scene Three, Action!10/11/2008 c1 
10Caecilia
Love it!
No spelling or grammar things that I can find. Never read anything like this before. Very different.
Only one thing [watch supposed fascinating movie.] Might make some more sense if you added 'the' right after 'watch'.
Greatness, Gobs.
~Cae
10CaeciliaLove it!
No spelling or grammar things that I can find. Never read anything like this before. Very different.
Only one thing [watch supposed fascinating movie.] Might make some more sense if you added 'the' right after 'watch'.
Greatness, Gobs.
~Cae
8/15/2008 c1 19S. M. Saves
I've never seen a piece like this before. Very creative!
One line confused me: "that billions of young teens would pour in (to) theatres to watch to supposed fascinating movie": "to supposed fascinating"? Was that supposed to be "the supposed fascinating movie"?
19S. M. SavesI've never seen a piece like this before. Very creative!
One line confused me: "that billions of young teens would pour in (to) theatres to watch to supposed fascinating movie": "to supposed fascinating"? Was that supposed to be "the supposed fascinating movie"?