for Eye Spy7/18/2011 c1 
6Kalista Jia
It's pretty unique and sexy. LOL. Yes I suppose I'm sort of a serial killer fanatic... Although I do fancy them a lot, I really don't want to meet one. Hehehe.
Killer is getting too old for this? Awww the killer and hairdresser are so adorable. Slash serial killers are even better! *swoon*
I thought it is a very lovely, dark story~ like it!
~Kalista Jia~
6Kalista JiaIt's pretty unique and sexy. LOL. Yes I suppose I'm sort of a serial killer fanatic... Although I do fancy them a lot, I really don't want to meet one. Hehehe.
Killer is getting too old for this? Awww the killer and hairdresser are so adorable. Slash serial killers are even better! *swoon*
I thought it is a very lovely, dark story~ like it!
~Kalista Jia~
11/10/2009 c1 2FemoralGlyph
I’m left wondering if this is part of a short or a prologue of some kind because it doesn’t really seem like a whole story. Will there be more? –eager- 8D
I love eyes, really, and the sweetness between the two assailants is simply adorable! I giggled when the hairdresser was like ‘he’s getting too old for this’!:3 So cute! And the fact that they were too caught up in their own eye contact to even look at the girl as he gauged out one of her eyes? Simply stunning image!
There were a few little things that I noticed (if you’re planning on editing this piece that is): a few spelling mistakes-(“…reverend thought she was possesed[possessed] or something…”) (“…pulled a cellfrom[cell phone?] her…”) (“…pushed between her shoulderblades[shoulder blades] to get…”) (“…until she realized[realized] that I wasn't…”) (“…the scissors loosley[loosely] in my hand…”) (“…outdoors, but no-one[no one] visited the…”) and a missing capital letter-(“…eye. they[They] both widened…”)
2FemoralGlyphI’m left wondering if this is part of a short or a prologue of some kind because it doesn’t really seem like a whole story. Will there be more? –eager- 8D
I love eyes, really, and the sweetness between the two assailants is simply adorable! I giggled when the hairdresser was like ‘he’s getting too old for this’!:3 So cute! And the fact that they were too caught up in their own eye contact to even look at the girl as he gauged out one of her eyes? Simply stunning image!
There were a few little things that I noticed (if you’re planning on editing this piece that is): a few spelling mistakes-(“…reverend thought she was possesed[possessed] or something…”) (“…pulled a cellfrom[cell phone?] her…”) (“…pushed between her shoulderblades[shoulder blades] to get…”) (“…until she realized[realized] that I wasn't…”) (“…the scissors loosley[loosely] in my hand…”) (“…outdoors, but no-one[no one] visited the…”) and a missing capital letter-(“…eye. they[They] both widened…”)
8/8/2008 c1 Morgana's Raven
This is a very intriging story. I'm curious, is this a oneshot or a story because it really could be either. I hope it's a story, If it is update soon.
This is a very intriging story. I'm curious, is this a oneshot or a story because it really could be either. I hope it's a story, If it is update soon.
7/29/2008 c1 James Nelms
Firstly, thanks very much for reviewing Middleground.
Secondly, this is an ace bit of writing here - I especially loved the final line...it's such a refreshing twist on a common phrase!
And the repetition of 'snip, snip, snip' works brilliantly too!
Firstly, thanks very much for reviewing Middleground.
Secondly, this is an ace bit of writing here - I especially loved the final line...it's such a refreshing twist on a common phrase!
And the repetition of 'snip, snip, snip' works brilliantly too!