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1/2/2009 c1 obfuscation
Wow, that ending caught me really off guard

though I love how you lead us through the story

great read :D
7/25/2008 c1 4Javier de Palacios
That was very good, morally detached and twisting social norms. I loved how something can be pure and tender love or perverted, depending on the perspective.
7/6/2008 c1 7Silencia
so sad! A little confusing though XD

Grtz Silencia
7/5/2008 c1 31Hopelessly Cliche
Wow, I honestly did NOT see that one coming! It was such an awesome ending! The whole tape recorder bits were what brought the story to life! When I went back and read it over again, there were small words spoken and lines that link up to the fact that they're siblings. I thought that was a great oneshot, a dramatic ending, well done! :D


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