7/16/2013 c2 6From0the0Ashes
This story is AWESOME! I've never read a story from the so called villain's POV, though I've considered doing it myself. And I love, in the least morbid way possible, how the heroine dies in the beginning. I'm all for switching stuff around. Keep going! You have a really engaging writing style, lighthearted but not idiotic. Thank you for being original!
This story is AWESOME! I've never read a story from the so called villain's POV, though I've considered doing it myself. And I love, in the least morbid way possible, how the heroine dies in the beginning. I'm all for switching stuff around. Keep going! You have a really engaging writing style, lighthearted but not idiotic. Thank you for being original!
3/10/2010 c16 TymCon
Nice new chapter. As per usual Thirrlight is funny. It's an enjoyable read, although if you want me to be honest im hoping for a big twist in the storyXD
Nice new chapter. As per usual Thirrlight is funny. It's an enjoyable read, although if you want me to be honest im hoping for a big twist in the storyXD
1/16/2010 c15 19sugaplumprincess
yay I was super excited to see an update! this was entertaining as always, and happily explained the slightly bizarre 'socks or war' letter from the last chapter, though I was hoping that Thirry was just being all crazy. I think he and the princess will do well together :)
this was rather short but i'm looking forward to more frequent updates since you said you'd be posting scene by scene?
one point, I thought Caurien was half-dragon and half-vampire, not half-incubus?
yay I was super excited to see an update! this was entertaining as always, and happily explained the slightly bizarre 'socks or war' letter from the last chapter, though I was hoping that Thirry was just being all crazy. I think he and the princess will do well together :)
this was rather short but i'm looking forward to more frequent updates since you said you'd be posting scene by scene?
one point, I thought Caurien was half-dragon and half-vampire, not half-incubus?
1/14/2010 c15 7Gracefulfire
NEW CHAPTER! OM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM!
Hmm, so it wasn't Thirry who sent the socks or war message. hm...
NEW CHAPTER! OM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM-NOM!
Hmm, so it wasn't Thirry who sent the socks or war message. hm...
9/25/2009 c14 TymCon
Was it the fact that the socks were given to the army and not exploded. Im probably wrong. Well good chapter and two new characters are introduced:P
Was it the fact that the socks were given to the army and not exploded. Im probably wrong. Well good chapter and two new characters are introduced:P
9/25/2009 c14 Gracefulfire
Very, very good chapter. I really felt the connection between the father and daughter being balanced with the relation of king and princess. It's rare that I come across a work that portrays royalty as both a political class and as real people at the same time. Seriously, amazing work here.
So... I guessing the plot hole is that Thirry doesn't call out the king for knowing that the 'exploded' cargo was footwear. Why would he know that, unless his examiners reported the incident with the phrase 'rain of flaming socks', hmm? Are the socks already distributed or something so they can't be given back? Or were they really made of explodium?
I feel better about the whole kidnapping thing now that we know she's not in love, but the political implications are a little more serious now.
Melmo? What? I smell back-plot! Huzzah!
The set-up for the letter part was a bit confusing in places to see who was talking, but then I'm kinda hungry so it's probably my fault there. Although, I do wonder about how long Thirry has been in power and how long it would take a letter to travel between the two. Wait, how does the mail system work? Did Thirry like send a carrier vulture or something?
six classes AND work AND you still find time to write? Man, you make me feel lazy. Stupid 19th century British literature stealing all my time... again, try not to burn out. It would be kind of jarring if you start killing off characters for stress relief. You're a wonderful writer and I always look forward to the times when I can read this.
Very, very good chapter. I really felt the connection between the father and daughter being balanced with the relation of king and princess. It's rare that I come across a work that portrays royalty as both a political class and as real people at the same time. Seriously, amazing work here.
So... I guessing the plot hole is that Thirry doesn't call out the king for knowing that the 'exploded' cargo was footwear. Why would he know that, unless his examiners reported the incident with the phrase 'rain of flaming socks', hmm? Are the socks already distributed or something so they can't be given back? Or were they really made of explodium?
I feel better about the whole kidnapping thing now that we know she's not in love, but the political implications are a little more serious now.
Melmo? What? I smell back-plot! Huzzah!
The set-up for the letter part was a bit confusing in places to see who was talking, but then I'm kinda hungry so it's probably my fault there. Although, I do wonder about how long Thirry has been in power and how long it would take a letter to travel between the two. Wait, how does the mail system work? Did Thirry like send a carrier vulture or something?
six classes AND work AND you still find time to write? Man, you make me feel lazy. Stupid 19th century British literature stealing all my time... again, try not to burn out. It would be kind of jarring if you start killing off characters for stress relief. You're a wonderful writer and I always look forward to the times when I can read this.
9/15/2009 c13 TymCon
Hahahah best part of this chapter was where the head of the household was talking to tieriel(I think im spelling his name wrong every time) and luiriene was crying out:P Wonder wat ardeem did to drought the place and cow the servents:P Defenitly a gem of a story:)
Hahahah best part of this chapter was where the head of the household was talking to tieriel(I think im spelling his name wrong every time) and luiriene was crying out:P Wonder wat ardeem did to drought the place and cow the servents:P Defenitly a gem of a story:)
9/15/2009 c12 TymCon
Omg so shes meating thearyell:O Well this should be exciting, and kinda awkward:P
Omg so shes meating thearyell:O Well this should be exciting, and kinda awkward:P
9/15/2009 c11 TymCon
Well we found out vyn killed thyleans faher, wordy plays pranks and a stuffed rabbit was involved in this chapter:D Cant have an evil overlord story without a stuffed rabbit:P:D
Well we found out vyn killed thyleans faher, wordy plays pranks and a stuffed rabbit was involved in this chapter:D Cant have an evil overlord story without a stuffed rabbit:P:D
9/15/2009 c10 TymCon
I kinda expected Mortimer to kill them:P Salth is so pompous! Gr. Still like all youre caracters and salths father sounds cool.
I kinda expected Mortimer to kill them:P Salth is so pompous! Gr. Still like all youre caracters and salths father sounds cool.
9/15/2009 c9 TymCon
Thats a bad curse:O For a wound to reopen every month:O Hah that talk about the grandfather getting snagged on stuff:P Yeah it was a bit jaring, like the perspective, in the few chapters. As long as we can hear thyreals thoughts im happy:P
Thats a bad curse:O For a wound to reopen every month:O Hah that talk about the grandfather getting snagged on stuff:P Yeah it was a bit jaring, like the perspective, in the few chapters. As long as we can hear thyreals thoughts im happy:P
9/15/2009 c4 TymCon
HAhaahha thirilights inermonouloges r so funny:P Especially the awkward silence part, and the grandfahers funny as well:P
HAhaahha thirilights inermonouloges r so funny:P Especially the awkward silence part, and the grandfahers funny as well:P
9/7/2009 c13 Gracefulfire
...Beahahahahaha! Does Thirry have any idea what he's implied he did? Does he care? Oh man, this is SO going to bite him in the butt later, isn't it? hehehe...
Good chapter overall. I can see why Wordy can see hope for a hero in Thirry. A little (okay, rather) ruthless to people he's not in charge of, but given his upbringing it's not surprising, and hey, what hero doesn't have a mean streak?
I have to disapprove of the kidnapping plan though. Really, I thought Thirry had more sense than that. Kidnapping woman on her wedding day=evil. Throwing a kingdom into panic=also evil. Possibly destroying all political implications of a royal wedding=very evil. Marrying someone you (probably) don't know=not so much evil as jerkish and stupid. Really, shotgunning someone into marring you who you (probably) haven't met isn't the best way to have domestic bliss. What if you don't share any interests? Or what if she's a shrew? For grog's sake Thirry, think of your sanity!
Oh, and it will probably bring a butt load of heroes to your door while your still trying to move in and establish order and loyalty in your new home while dealing with Mr. Doomy Liver, but whatever.
Good luck with this semester; I hope your classes are fun. Don't burn yourself out.
...Beahahahahaha! Does Thirry have any idea what he's implied he did? Does he care? Oh man, this is SO going to bite him in the butt later, isn't it? hehehe...
Good chapter overall. I can see why Wordy can see hope for a hero in Thirry. A little (okay, rather) ruthless to people he's not in charge of, but given his upbringing it's not surprising, and hey, what hero doesn't have a mean streak?
I have to disapprove of the kidnapping plan though. Really, I thought Thirry had more sense than that. Kidnapping woman on her wedding day=evil. Throwing a kingdom into panic=also evil. Possibly destroying all political implications of a royal wedding=very evil. Marrying someone you (probably) don't know=not so much evil as jerkish and stupid. Really, shotgunning someone into marring you who you (probably) haven't met isn't the best way to have domestic bliss. What if you don't share any interests? Or what if she's a shrew? For grog's sake Thirry, think of your sanity!
Oh, and it will probably bring a butt load of heroes to your door while your still trying to move in and establish order and loyalty in your new home while dealing with Mr. Doomy Liver, but whatever.
Good luck with this semester; I hope your classes are fun. Don't burn yourself out.