for Memories12/30/2009 c1 
6Yoron
Very good, the spirit of it is a haiku to me, catching a bittersweet memory as it glides past you,
6YoronVery good, the spirit of it is a haiku to me, catching a bittersweet memory as it glides past you,
7/13/2009 c1 3BlaznFangurl
Aw, how sad. You write beautiful poetry. Sorry about the short review, I never know how to write long reviews for a poem. It was really nice though.
Blazn, via the Roadhouse, pay it forward :)
3BlaznFangurlAw, how sad. You write beautiful poetry. Sorry about the short review, I never know how to write long reviews for a poem. It was really nice though.
Blazn, via the Roadhouse, pay it forward :)
7/13/2009 c1 Reigh
Short but powerful. I've never been good at interpreting poetry that's not mine, but it seems to me that a park, or camp site, or other kind of out door place from your childhood has been chosen as a construction site. I can definitely relate to seeing things from your past knocked down and built over. I liked this one a lot! Good work.
~Reigh~
With Love from the Roadhouse
You have been repaid!
Short but powerful. I've never been good at interpreting poetry that's not mine, but it seems to me that a park, or camp site, or other kind of out door place from your childhood has been chosen as a construction site. I can definitely relate to seeing things from your past knocked down and built over. I liked this one a lot! Good work.
~Reigh~
With Love from the Roadhouse
You have been repaid!
7/10/2009 c1 Xx-Angel-of-Shadows-xX
Oh, your poems are incredibly sad, but hauntingly beautiful.
Keep writing, you are amazing, and I am sure you could get these published with ease!
~Star~
Oh, your poems are incredibly sad, but hauntingly beautiful.
Keep writing, you are amazing, and I am sure you could get these published with ease!
~Star~
1/8/2009 c1 7yarrowicefrost
Wow. You said a lot with such less words, very emphatic. Very nostalgic, it struck a chord 'cause a lot of things I valued became mere memories...
7yarrowicefrostWow. You said a lot with such less words, very emphatic. Very nostalgic, it struck a chord 'cause a lot of things I valued became mere memories...
12/11/2008 c1 2Selarose
Silly Silence, this is great! I'm not much for poetry, really, but I love this. So you know that's a compliment of the highest kind. :P
Seriously, this is going in my favorites. You had me from the start, with "ghost-like crumbs." That's my favorite line. ^-^ So descriptive and full of depth-and it's only two words!
I think I'd better stop before I start gushing. XD
2SelaroseSilly Silence, this is great! I'm not much for poetry, really, but I love this. So you know that's a compliment of the highest kind. :P
Seriously, this is going in my favorites. You had me from the start, with "ghost-like crumbs." That's my favorite line. ^-^ So descriptive and full of depth-and it's only two words!
I think I'd better stop before I start gushing. XD
12/9/2008 c1 11xDancingintheRainx
Heartbreaking. The first stanza is definitely my favorite. The imagery is beautiful and I can definitely relate. Very well done.
11xDancingintheRainxHeartbreaking. The first stanza is definitely my favorite. The imagery is beautiful and I can definitely relate. Very well done.
9/29/2008 c1 NJ Is My Home
beautifully described
i think a more profound title is necessary for a poem like this
beautifully described
i think a more profound title is necessary for a poem like this
9/8/2008 c1 i-want-2-delete-my-account
This is really good - and sad at the same time. I really like the line 'footprints before the footsteps'
This is really good - and sad at the same time. I really like the line 'footprints before the footsteps'
8/17/2008 c1 588Setsuna529
Sadly, I can relate to this poem... too many of the places of my childhood have disappeared beneath new housing developments and the like. Anyway, I love how this poem is written, both the diction and organization. The first stanza is my favorite. Wonderful job.
588Setsuna529Sadly, I can relate to this poem... too many of the places of my childhood have disappeared beneath new housing developments and the like. Anyway, I love how this poem is written, both the diction and organization. The first stanza is my favorite. Wonderful job.
7/21/2008 c1 fleur de l'est
Nice. I'm normally obsessed with rhymes, but this time I didn't really notice it. There's a good flow to the poem and each stanza forms a separate scene, and they all link in very well - really good imagery. Also, I liked how the pattern stopped at the third stanza and suddenly things moved along.
Anyway, can't exactly think of anything negative to say. So big pat on your back XD
~fleur
Nice. I'm normally obsessed with rhymes, but this time I didn't really notice it. There's a good flow to the poem and each stanza forms a separate scene, and they all link in very well - really good imagery. Also, I liked how the pattern stopped at the third stanza and suddenly things moved along.
Anyway, can't exactly think of anything negative to say. So big pat on your back XD
~fleur