for Just Another Monday7/23/2008 c2 kagstar
Yay! Nick! btw u should edit before you upload cos there are some mistakes but otherwise nice
Yay! Nick! btw u should edit before you upload cos there are some mistakes but otherwise nice
7/7/2008 c2 
31Hopelessly Cliche
Yay! Se! Alls I had to do was click on the next button...or the arrow button...which ever! lol Remember: Fulls stops and commas after speech! Hahaha! She found out it was Nick not Nicky! *sigh* Can't wait to read whats next! Update! :D
HC
31Hopelessly ClicheYay! Se! Alls I had to do was click on the next button...or the arrow button...which ever! lol Remember: Fulls stops and commas after speech! Hahaha! She found out it was Nick not Nicky! *sigh* Can't wait to read whats next! Update! :D
HC
7/7/2008 c1 Hopelessly Cliche
Ooh! Great start! I bet it's that new dude, though she thinks its a dudette, that stole her car space! Evil car space taker! Just a quickie point the second to last line says 'I' instead of she. Thought I'd let you know, I love it when people show me my mistakes, reminds me that I'm human! lol Anywho, alls I gots to do is press the arrow button for the nxt chappie! (says in New York accent) Woot! :D
HC
Ooh! Great start! I bet it's that new dude, though she thinks its a dudette, that stole her car space! Evil car space taker! Just a quickie point the second to last line says 'I' instead of she. Thought I'd let you know, I love it when people show me my mistakes, reminds me that I'm human! lol Anywho, alls I gots to do is press the arrow button for the nxt chappie! (says in New York accent) Woot! :D
HC