for And So She Is7/7/2008 c1 
23english summer rain
'retches for the wretches', nice play on words, most probably my most favourite line. i like the concept, and the images you've created. just one thing that bugs me a little, the inconsistancy with the capitalisation, and punctuation? that and a few of the line breaks made the flow a little awkward for me. but apart from that good job, keep writing :D
23english summer rain'retches for the wretches', nice play on words, most probably my most favourite line. i like the concept, and the images you've created. just one thing that bugs me a little, the inconsistancy with the capitalisation, and punctuation? that and a few of the line breaks made the flow a little awkward for me. but apart from that good job, keep writing :D