
6/18/2016 c1
1TheGirlinPurpleGlasses
This was SO good. Jesus the feels though! You're amazingly talented, keep writing please! :)

This was SO good. Jesus the feels though! You're amazingly talented, keep writing please! :)
11/5/2015 c1 annayh44
Yeahhh all guys really do act like that when they found they are in love with their bestfriend (girl) ehhhh thats kinda of irritating ...but yeah the story was amazing but I felt he forget Dannie's birthday ..the girl he love and also is bestfriend,,.how can he? That's pure disappointing
Yeahhh all guys really do act like that when they found they are in love with their bestfriend (girl) ehhhh thats kinda of irritating ...but yeah the story was amazing but I felt he forget Dannie's birthday ..the girl he love and also is bestfriend,,.how can he? That's pure disappointing
9/3/2013 c1
1APassionForReadingAndWriting
Haha! Very sweet but amusing story! I loved it :-) Great job! :)

Haha! Very sweet but amusing story! I loved it :-) Great job! :)
4/16/2013 c1 Guest
Cute! :D
Cute! :D
8/20/2012 c1 readingisorgazmic
This story literally hurt my heart reading the start of it. But the end my sad tears turned happy
This story literally hurt my heart reading the start of it. But the end my sad tears turned happy
8/26/2011 c1
3dawnita
aww. i love this story! it's amazing. it's not like the other "best-friend-ditched-for-girlfriend plot" - i mean, it sort of is for the plot part, but yeah - because it's just really good. i love your characters so much! they're just so . . . down to earth :)
and i love how you put the .;;.
and yeah. i don't know what pwned is. thanks for saying what it meant at the end.
it's super cool. i love your writing style!

aww. i love this story! it's amazing. it's not like the other "best-friend-ditched-for-girlfriend plot" - i mean, it sort of is for the plot part, but yeah - because it's just really good. i love your characters so much! they're just so . . . down to earth :)
and i love how you put the .;;.
and yeah. i don't know what pwned is. thanks for saying what it meant at the end.
it's super cool. i love your writing style!
8/14/2011 c1 Alanisaur
I Effing love this story! xD Ahaha, it is isanely lame to speak like that in person. But hey! Its Flipping fun! :) I perso ly do talk like this. And yes i hae been called immature. But! ...Um... Stuff. :|
Okay well. I just really love your story. I can relate to it in the nerdy lame speech the characters use. I mean if a guy came up to me and said soemthing along the lines the i pwn him. Id probably fall in love. ;D
I Effing love this story! xD Ahaha, it is isanely lame to speak like that in person. But hey! Its Flipping fun! :) I perso ly do talk like this. And yes i hae been called immature. But! ...Um... Stuff. :|
Okay well. I just really love your story. I can relate to it in the nerdy lame speech the characters use. I mean if a guy came up to me and said soemthing along the lines the i pwn him. Id probably fall in love. ;D
1/24/2011 c1 Fugly
AHAHA Effing pro story. :D
It reminded me of what a dork I used to be. I remember just a few months ago, I'd talk in gaming lingo ALL the time, so I told my best friend to bishslap me whenever I use it irl. It kinda helped. Bastard enjoyed it way too much.
Anyway, great story, and excellent choice of names. :P
AHAHA Effing pro story. :D
It reminded me of what a dork I used to be. I remember just a few months ago, I'd talk in gaming lingo ALL the time, so I told my best friend to bishslap me whenever I use it irl. It kinda helped. Bastard enjoyed it way too much.
Anyway, great story, and excellent choice of names. :P
1/12/2011 c1 Anara Celebvilya
LOL! That was awesome! It was hilarious, especially the end, and you did a really good job of mixing in the gaming lingo without making them sound stupid... Well... except for Jacey at the end. She did sound stupid, but I'm guessing that was intentional.
You know, I love the term 'roflcopter'. It cracks me up just saying it. I suppose that's kind of fitting, huh? And I know all to well what 'pwned' is. I have a friend that says, and types, it way to much.
Thanks so much for the laugh!
=Liz=
LOL! That was awesome! It was hilarious, especially the end, and you did a really good job of mixing in the gaming lingo without making them sound stupid... Well... except for Jacey at the end. She did sound stupid, but I'm guessing that was intentional.
You know, I love the term 'roflcopter'. It cracks me up just saying it. I suppose that's kind of fitting, huh? And I know all to well what 'pwned' is. I have a friend that says, and types, it way to much.
Thanks so much for the laugh!
=Liz=