for I'm Sorry7/19/2008 c1 
612simpleplan13
I think fp messed up and repeated your title twice in the piece.
I like this piece because it is very relateable and it's full of emotion.
I definitely would no repeat I'm sorry so many times and I might try to throw in a few good word choices or descriptions. But as you said you wrote it awhile back so I know this is better than most of my old stuff.. lol.
PS If your bored check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile).
612simpleplan13I think fp messed up and repeated your title twice in the piece.
I like this piece because it is very relateable and it's full of emotion.
I definitely would no repeat I'm sorry so many times and I might try to throw in a few good word choices or descriptions. But as you said you wrote it awhile back so I know this is better than most of my old stuff.. lol.
PS If your bored check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (link in my profile).