1/3/2010 c1 34Ashlee Pond
This is a great poem, you've done a good job with delivering the emotions.

Adding some punctuation might be a good idea, just to make it a bit easier to follow, but poems are also good when left free flowing.

You did a wonderful job for your first time writing a poem.

3/1/2009 c1 officially missing youu
Hey you!~

Oh my goodness, such a wonderful poem.

I love how detailed the emotion and just made it pop out!

Lol. Honey, this is MORE than okay . . . it's GREAT! :)

Lovely work :)

Peace,

Chicky