for The Fall of Light2/23/2019 c9 Guest
Dark, handsome and sexy dark lourds? Yes please!
Dark, handsome and sexy dark lourds? Yes please!
4/27/2018 c21 MCGonzalez
Hi! I had read this story some time ago, but recently read it again! And just like the first time that I read it, I feel in love with the story! I know it has been very long since you updated, but I hope that you get this review and can continue this story!
Hi! I had read this story some time ago, but recently read it again! And just like the first time that I read it, I feel in love with the story! I know it has been very long since you updated, but I hope that you get this review and can continue this story!
11/4/2016 c20 
3herondalechick123
OH my gosh please update! This story was a truly great take on Persephone and Hades and I wish it didn't have to end so abruptly. It leaves us readers in suspense! Please return so that we know how Persephone shows Hades her love.
3herondalechick123OH my gosh please update! This story was a truly great take on Persephone and Hades and I wish it didn't have to end so abruptly. It leaves us readers in suspense! Please return so that we know how Persephone shows Hades her love.
1/9/2013 c5 Theisaryz Eufuelle
Cup-cupcake?!
Also you gave me quite a fright with that Old Man description of Hades... I knew Hades wasn't ugly. He's a God for goodness sake. They should never look old (even Hephaestus). That's what the Ambrosia and Nectar are for. So imagining him as a decrepit old man gave me a mind screw... Until you let that charade up, I couldn't fully believe the words...just, you know, frightened.
Cup-cupcake?!
Also you gave me quite a fright with that Old Man description of Hades... I knew Hades wasn't ugly. He's a God for goodness sake. They should never look old (even Hephaestus). That's what the Ambrosia and Nectar are for. So imagining him as a decrepit old man gave me a mind screw... Until you let that charade up, I couldn't fully believe the words...just, you know, frightened.
1/9/2013 c3 Theisaryz Eufuelle
Surely there are more Gods and Godesses under Hades' rule. There's Thanatos death incarnate, Hecate the sorceress, Hypnos and Morpheus to name a few of them. Charon is not the only one. Well I'll let that pass... It just bums me out that Hades only has one subject during such a meeting... it kinda makes his role insignificant...
Surely there are more Gods and Godesses under Hades' rule. There's Thanatos death incarnate, Hecate the sorceress, Hypnos and Morpheus to name a few of them. Charon is not the only one. Well I'll let that pass... It just bums me out that Hades only has one subject during such a meeting... it kinda makes his role insignificant...
12/10/2012 c22 Guest
loving it but where is the rest :(
loving it but where is the rest :(
12/10/2012 c3 Guest
love it
love it
11/4/2012 c22 Possibilityoflament
This story is so very good! Please write more soon, I cannot wait to see what Persephone will do.
This story is so very good! Please write more soon, I cannot wait to see what Persephone will do.
8/18/2012 c22 Ella
Is this like seriously the end? Please don't let it be! Could you please, please end it?
Is this like seriously the end? Please don't let it be! Could you please, please end it?
6/16/2012 c14 ivyaya56
This is amazing. I can't stop reading! I've been reading this story for at least 2 or 3 hours analyzing every word-and loving every bit of it. I wish I could write this well. I can feel the emotions in my stomach (that sounds funny haha) and my stomach feels like an empty pit because of Hades's pain.
This is amazing. I can't stop reading! I've been reading this story for at least 2 or 3 hours analyzing every word-and loving every bit of it. I wish I could write this well. I can feel the emotions in my stomach (that sounds funny haha) and my stomach feels like an empty pit because of Hades's pain.
12/18/2011 c22 9Phoebe Majere
HURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT ONE! Or is this the end? I hope not, I want Hades to find out how much Persephone loves him! Gah, I get giggly so bad and run to my boyfriend and kiss him. :) I love it. I'm reading it for enjoyment and not critique, because if I do, I won't like it. :D Can't wait for the next chapter.
Your devoted reader and follower
9Phoebe MajereHURRY UP AND POST THE NEXT ONE! Or is this the end? I hope not, I want Hades to find out how much Persephone loves him! Gah, I get giggly so bad and run to my boyfriend and kiss him. :) I love it. I'm reading it for enjoyment and not critique, because if I do, I won't like it. :D Can't wait for the next chapter.
Your devoted reader and follower
12/16/2011 c22 Nic
This story is amazing! Please tell me it's not over yet! I really really really want it to keep going on and I want to find out whether or not Hades truly believes Persephone and whether they get married or fall in love! Please tell me it's not over yet! This is one of myfavorite versions of the story and I want it to end happily! Would you be wiling to email me your answer at please? And congratulations and writing such a moving and incredibly beautiful story!
This story is amazing! Please tell me it's not over yet! I really really really want it to keep going on and I want to find out whether or not Hades truly believes Persephone and whether they get married or fall in love! Please tell me it's not over yet! This is one of myfavorite versions of the story and I want it to end happily! Would you be wiling to email me your answer at please? And congratulations and writing such a moving and incredibly beautiful story!
11/21/2011 c22 magnafia
I really like this story, i hope that you will uptade it soon but even if not i just wanted to let you know that i have really enjoyed reading it.
I really like this story, i hope that you will uptade it soon but even if not i just wanted to let you know that i have really enjoyed reading it.