for The Fall of Light7/29/2008 c5 zagato
hi! thank you for the update. this is the chapter in the summary. i like how hades can change his appearance. so it seems that he can look younger when he is with persephone. thank you again and please continue.
hi! thank you for the update. this is the chapter in the summary. i like how hades can change his appearance. so it seems that he can look younger when he is with persephone. thank you again and please continue.
7/28/2008 c5 
2Buri-kun
squish factor maximized...eep. hades is quite...forceful here. and the last line leaves me with mixed feelings.
i'm not quite sure about what i feel about this chappie...the 'dangerous' feel is certainly well-played-out, but the last line... persephone seems a bit brazen for what just happened- i mean, pinning someone against the wall and telling them to marry you is a crepy thing to do...
good job! the atmosphere really gets me!
2Buri-kunsquish factor maximized...eep. hades is quite...forceful here. and the last line leaves me with mixed feelings.
i'm not quite sure about what i feel about this chappie...the 'dangerous' feel is certainly well-played-out, but the last line... persephone seems a bit brazen for what just happened- i mean, pinning someone against the wall and telling them to marry you is a crepy thing to do...
good job! the atmosphere really gets me!
7/26/2008 c4 zagato
Hi crz4greece! I really like Hades and Persephone and your story is perfect. Thank you for your plan to update each week.
Hi crz4greece! I really like Hades and Persephone and your story is perfect. Thank you for your plan to update each week.
7/21/2008 c3 zagato
Hi! Thank you for your update! I read your story and have it as one of my favorites. I would love to read the chapter portrayed in your summary about Hades saying he would be a good husband. Please continue.
Hi! Thank you for your update! I read your story and have it as one of my favorites. I would love to read the chapter portrayed in your summary about Hades saying he would be a good husband. Please continue.
7/21/2008 c3 Buri-kun
Wow- Hades ish funneh- he's not afraid to push Zeus's bottons even though he's more powerful. Though i rather imagined that hades was kind of quiet and soft-voiced, more in the vein of 'the quiet nerd'. though that wouldn't fit very much into the idea of godliness, would it?
The story so far is really good- it's amazing how each one of the characters seems in concord with the 'traditional' portrayals, though a few details I'd nitpick over, but only the minor ones.
Kudos to yous!
Wow- Hades ish funneh- he's not afraid to push Zeus's bottons even though he's more powerful. Though i rather imagined that hades was kind of quiet and soft-voiced, more in the vein of 'the quiet nerd'. though that wouldn't fit very much into the idea of godliness, would it?
The story so far is really good- it's amazing how each one of the characters seems in concord with the 'traditional' portrayals, though a few details I'd nitpick over, but only the minor ones.
Kudos to yous!