Just In
for Acquittal

7/22/2008 c1 56felicia13
Wow. That was sort of awful. Subject, not poem.

I don't know how I feel about being in the same dedication as Angelina Jolie. Feels... weird.

Second stanza's my favorite. Just... I don't know. Speaks to me. I love the ending, too. "Later we'll claim suicide." Just a really excellent way to end.

I won't claim to understand this. It's a lot of emotion and imagry. It's very brittle. I like it.

Fitting, I suppose, for an acquittal.

Love Always,

7/14/2008 c1 194yodel a blue streak
I really like the two middle stanzas. They seem to have a tightly coiled, passive-aggressive undercurrent that kind of grab you and hold on...if that makes sense...
7/13/2008 c1 23english summer rain
brilliant, especially second stanza. i envy your ability to make short line breaks work.

don't quit fp :)

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