for Move Along12/7/2016 c15 jamie
thanks for writing this! i thoroughly enjoyed it :)
thanks for writing this! i thoroughly enjoyed it :)
2/15/2013 c1 Guest
I think this story was great! You should think about a sequel about Annie and Jamie's story some years after Move Along, perhaps he could come back from the Army for Jack and Mac's wedding (wink, wink) haha just an idea. Or you could write Ben's love story (I loved Ben).
Keep writing!
I think this story was great! You should think about a sequel about Annie and Jamie's story some years after Move Along, perhaps he could come back from the Army for Jack and Mac's wedding (wink, wink) haha just an idea. Or you could write Ben's love story (I loved Ben).
Keep writing!
5/25/2012 c15 J
great story despite the predictable storyline :) i think you've managed to make the characters come alive through your style of writing :) keep it up!
great story despite the predictable storyline :) i think you've managed to make the characters come alive through your style of writing :) keep it up!
9/29/2011 c15 
2KoriNeko18
Cute story! I liked it lots. The only thing was that it felt a little too fast. I don't know why, just felt like everything was a bit rushed. Anyway, I did love this story! ^^
2KoriNeko18Cute story! I liked it lots. The only thing was that it felt a little too fast. I don't know why, just felt like everything was a bit rushed. Anyway, I did love this story! ^^
4/3/2011 c15 13MADdreamers
This was really nicely written. It was a great length for a story, not too long or too short. I really liked the main characters, and I felt bad for Ben since he didn't end up with anyone haha.Great job!
13MADdreamersThis was really nicely written. It was a great length for a story, not too long or too short. I really liked the main characters, and I felt bad for Ben since he didn't end up with anyone haha.Great job!
1/22/2011 c15 asiaalicexx
your story was amazing! i loved all the characters(except Logan lol)they were developed beautifully and very easy to relate too
your story was amazing! i loved all the characters(except Logan lol)they were developed beautifully and very easy to relate too
11/7/2010 c15 2carefreewannabe
Omg, omg, omg! I loved it a lot! It was really well written. I cried a couple of times because it was really really touching. You did a great job! ;D
2carefreewannabeOmg, omg, omg! I loved it a lot! It was really well written. I cried a couple of times because it was really really touching. You did a great job! ;D
10/24/2010 c15 Beartrap
Enjoyed the story, but I hope that's not really your outlook on the Army. My baby brother is 11x Infantry in a replacement unit. He's the guy on the front lines that goes in when someone else is wounded or killed. I can't imagine being anything but fully supportive of him and the rest of the soldiers. They're who stand between my freedom and anyone that wants to take it from me.
Anywho. Very cute story. I really liked reading it.
Enjoyed the story, but I hope that's not really your outlook on the Army. My baby brother is 11x Infantry in a replacement unit. He's the guy on the front lines that goes in when someone else is wounded or killed. I can't imagine being anything but fully supportive of him and the rest of the soldiers. They're who stand between my freedom and anyone that wants to take it from me.
Anywho. Very cute story. I really liked reading it.
6/29/2010 c15 1Pain1415
i LOVED the story. At the begining i thought it was a little werid but as it went on i changed my mind good jod
1Pain1415i LOVED the story. At the begining i thought it was a little werid but as it went on i changed my mind good jod
6/6/2010 c15 5jaliwo
I wasn't too sure about this story the first time I read the first chapter. But I came back to it a few weeks later and gave it a second chance, and I'm glad I did. It seems in most stories I read on fictionpress the guy "saves" the girl, and in this story it was the reverse and realistic. Very refreshing.
5jaliwoI wasn't too sure about this story the first time I read the first chapter. But I came back to it a few weeks later and gave it a second chance, and I'm glad I did. It seems in most stories I read on fictionpress the guy "saves" the girl, and in this story it was the reverse and realistic. Very refreshing.
4/30/2010 c15 3LanternLight13
Lovely story. The characyers were written really well. Thankyou for sharing.
3LanternLight13Lovely story. The characyers were written really well. Thankyou for sharing.