for More Than Lust2/8/2019 c28 Guest
Please update, a good storyteller never leaves it unfinished.. Your fan from India
Please update, a good storyteller never leaves it unfinished.. Your fan from India
5/28/2018 c28 Guest
so this hasn't been updated in years .. clearly abandoned. i was into it for a few chapters then at around 13 i started to skim. took you to long to get where you needed to be. chapters that were 90% dialogue, not ok. it you have a nice concept here it needs reworked and edited down by half and then you'll have yourself a great read. Marissa however needs to be more constant. her personality is ALL over the place. and people are right.. when Ezra talked to Marissa on her first day of school.. no one is like that. not realistically. edit this. rewrite it into something that is AMAZING cause the potential is there.
so this hasn't been updated in years .. clearly abandoned. i was into it for a few chapters then at around 13 i started to skim. took you to long to get where you needed to be. chapters that were 90% dialogue, not ok. it you have a nice concept here it needs reworked and edited down by half and then you'll have yourself a great read. Marissa however needs to be more constant. her personality is ALL over the place. and people are right.. when Ezra talked to Marissa on her first day of school.. no one is like that. not realistically. edit this. rewrite it into something that is AMAZING cause the potential is there.
10/29/2017 c28 stoutz
hooting for Ezra and Marissa to find their sexy-filled happy place together. Love the intense scene between them, and how, while Marissa doesn't agree/does everything he says, she has moments where she listens to him exactly. Those moments are just so true, and I luvv them, makes my heart happy for'em! Thank you for writing this, and looking forward to the next one, and the next one, and the next one, and the... ;)
hooting for Ezra and Marissa to find their sexy-filled happy place together. Love the intense scene between them, and how, while Marissa doesn't agree/does everything he says, she has moments where she listens to him exactly. Those moments are just so true, and I luvv them, makes my heart happy for'em! Thank you for writing this, and looking forward to the next one, and the next one, and the next one, and the... ;)
10/29/2017 c28 gunyung
plzz updattttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
plzz updattttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
10/29/2017 c28 gilgamesh007
I swear on the life of my future baby, if you don't update, my heart will break, me and the rest of the reviewers MISS YOUU...and your fic :( so PLEASSE..RETURNTO US, to complete this work of art ️
I swear on the life of my future baby, if you don't update, my heart will break, me and the rest of the reviewers MISS YOUU...and your fic :( so PLEASSE..RETURNTO US, to complete this work of art ️
10/29/2017 c28 boogi
admiring how your characters give a refreshing take from the average "poor girl goes to rich school, finds a hot boyfriend with attitude and a past" scenarios. I would even say its even in an genre of its own. Love how the characters interact well with one another, and how there isnt any characters there to "just fill space" if you know what I mean. Well keep pumping out these gs of stories, and I hope you return to continue this fic. Until then, enjoy the 30 or more stories you might be working on at the moment. CIAO (please forgive any grammatical errors I may have left)
admiring how your characters give a refreshing take from the average "poor girl goes to rich school, finds a hot boyfriend with attitude and a past" scenarios. I would even say its even in an genre of its own. Love how the characters interact well with one another, and how there isnt any characters there to "just fill space" if you know what I mean. Well keep pumping out these gs of stories, and I hope you return to continue this fic. Until then, enjoy the 30 or more stories you might be working on at the moment. CIAO (please forgive any grammatical errors I may have left)
12/4/2015 c28 Guest
such did promise you would finish this amazing
no update for 3 YEARS.
such did promise you would finish this amazing
no update for 3 YEARS.
5/30/2014 c28 
1KeepCalmAndFictionOn
This is awesome! I'm following in the hope that you will be updating soon. Please, please, PLEASE update. That's all I have to say. :)
1KeepCalmAndFictionOnThis is awesome! I'm following in the hope that you will be updating soon. Please, please, PLEASE update. That's all I have to say. :)
5/7/2014 c2 11OurHeartsBleeding
Great chapter. I really like the discussion at the picnic table. It brought out the personality traits of the characters quite well.
Great job!
11OurHeartsBleedingGreat chapter. I really like the discussion at the picnic table. It brought out the personality traits of the characters quite well.
Great job!
5/6/2014 c2 Guest
Your story was plagerized on here same plot and everything " seducing Silvia "
Your story was plagerized on here same plot and everything " seducing Silvia "
5/2/2014 c28 NoNONONO
wait, I just found this story, and it has not been u[dated in forever. :(
wait, I just found this story, and it has not been u[dated in forever. :(
4/4/2014 c28 2Xena Fox
Please continue this story. IT IS AWSOME! But I think this plea may be falling on deaf ears since you updated two years ago. But if you can; please finish it. For Ezra's sake :3
2Xena FoxPlease continue this story. IT IS AWSOME! But I think this plea may be falling on deaf ears since you updated two years ago. But if you can; please finish it. For Ezra's sake :3
12/22/2013 c28 PenguinLover33
When are you going to update? Because this story is so good that it needs to continue, and soon!
When are you going to update? Because this story is so good that it needs to continue, and soon!