
7/18/2008 c1 Jas
Very interesting. Please continue. Thank you.
Very interesting. Please continue. Thank you.
7/18/2008 c1 Michelle
Great start, though, kind of short. Please update soon! Thanks!
Great start, though, kind of short. Please update soon! Thanks!
7/18/2008 c1 Anonymous
Nice start. Keep writing.
Nice start. Keep writing.
7/18/2008 c1 happy.endings
I really like this story so far. I hope you won't make Marissa's reaction that of a cliched, typical hotheaded heroine. Not that I have anything against that...it's just so over-used. But it's your story and I'll keep reading and reviewing (as long as you keep updating!)
I really like this story so far. I hope you won't make Marissa's reaction that of a cliched, typical hotheaded heroine. Not that I have anything against that...it's just so over-used. But it's your story and I'll keep reading and reviewing (as long as you keep updating!)
7/18/2008 c1 Annalisa
Hey! I loved your story so far! It is rather cliched, but I've seen many authors make fabulous twists on age-old cliches. I can't wait to see your take on things. Please update soon!
Hey! I loved your story so far! It is rather cliched, but I've seen many authors make fabulous twists on age-old cliches. I can't wait to see your take on things. Please update soon!
7/14/2008 c1 atreyu love
haha. i like this story :)
Ezra is in for more than he could ever
imagine, huh? lol
PLEASE UPDATE!
haha. i like this story :)
Ezra is in for more than he could ever
imagine, huh? lol
PLEASE UPDATE!