
4/10/2010 c10 mydairyt14
There is a huge gap in the story that doesn't tell us what happens after Mike told Anna about Tallan, or how her brothers found out about it.
There is a huge gap in the story that doesn't tell us what happens after Mike told Anna about Tallan, or how her brothers found out about it.
12/9/2008 c10
18pinkfluffyoranges
aww slow updates, and it was just heating up ba damn. Loving the story, although at times i find it a bit to girly and over dramatic. but it was what i was in the mood for today. Keep up the good work and hope to read the next chapter soon.

aww slow updates, and it was just heating up ba damn. Loving the story, although at times i find it a bit to girly and over dramatic. but it was what i was in the mood for today. Keep up the good work and hope to read the next chapter soon.
12/7/2008 c10
20xxTunstall Chickxx
Oh oh. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! Aah, the suspense is killing me! Loved it.
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx

Oh oh. UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! Aah, the suspense is killing me! Loved it.
Keep Writing,
xxTunstall Chickxx
11/9/2008 c9
2righthere431
lol oh boy things get more complicated every chapter tsk tsk... but I hope you're happy at your new school... I hated being the new girl when I moved

lol oh boy things get more complicated every chapter tsk tsk... but I hope you're happy at your new school... I hated being the new girl when I moved
11/6/2008 c9 jule
when are you going to post more?
I really like it :D
when are you going to post more?
I really like it :D
11/4/2008 c9 Deeps
oh ! a very interesting chapter and i cant wait for the next chapter.
oh ! a very interesting chapter and i cant wait for the next chapter.