
12/22/2010 c19 T
Really great story i usually dont like 3rd person stories but u wrote this really well. please update soon
Really great story i usually dont like 3rd person stories but u wrote this really well. please update soon
12/21/2010 c1 cherry
I just finished reading this on authonomy. this story is amazing. you are amazing. thank you for giving me a very enjoyable couple of hours!
I just finished reading this on authonomy. this story is amazing. you are amazing. thank you for giving me a very enjoyable couple of hours!
12/20/2010 c18 Guest
isn“t the friends name christopher?
isn“t the friends name christopher?
12/17/2010 c19
7Arobow
Your last chapter? *sniff* It's...it's like the end of an era. I don't think I could have imagined it would have ended like that. Not that I can imagine it ending. I am still very much in need of an ending here!
It's just hard to believe that Tristan and AJ have a mutual recognition of general decency. (Is that a thing? It seems like that might not really be a thing...) I anticipated some kind of hot fist fighting action. It would have been exciting, unnecessary and I'm sure you would have made it hilarious somehow.
But I can't deny that I've been looking forward to the big happy Carrington family reunion (which of course wouldn't be complete without Tristan and...okay, I'm getting all confused is it George or Christopher?) for a long time and I can't believe you didn't give up on the story!
I know it's a long ways from the thousands of doting admirers you had before the Epic Fail of 200...(mumblesomething) but you're great, this is great and here's a preemptive WHOOP WHOOP! for the final chapter!

Your last chapter? *sniff* It's...it's like the end of an era. I don't think I could have imagined it would have ended like that. Not that I can imagine it ending. I am still very much in need of an ending here!
It's just hard to believe that Tristan and AJ have a mutual recognition of general decency. (Is that a thing? It seems like that might not really be a thing...) I anticipated some kind of hot fist fighting action. It would have been exciting, unnecessary and I'm sure you would have made it hilarious somehow.
But I can't deny that I've been looking forward to the big happy Carrington family reunion (which of course wouldn't be complete without Tristan and...okay, I'm getting all confused is it George or Christopher?) for a long time and I can't believe you didn't give up on the story!
I know it's a long ways from the thousands of doting admirers you had before the Epic Fail of 200...(mumblesomething) but you're great, this is great and here's a preemptive WHOOP WHOOP! for the final chapter!
12/17/2010 c19 redambrosia
What do you mean last chapter! There's soo much more to talk about now that Tristan is gone! AH NO! :( ...But yes that was a very entertaining chapter and I really want Nyx to have that mother figure :)
What do you mean last chapter! There's soo much more to talk about now that Tristan is gone! AH NO! :( ...But yes that was a very entertaining chapter and I really want Nyx to have that mother figure :)
12/17/2010 c19
2Annaface
I am loving this quick update. Will that be a regular thing now?
I feel like this chapter - with the TMZ sequence - showed that Nyx never really let herself be chill and flawed when she was with Christian - that she always had to be perfect.
And I appreciate that you aren't drawing the love triangle out for forever.
:)

I am loving this quick update. Will that be a regular thing now?
I feel like this chapter - with the TMZ sequence - showed that Nyx never really let herself be chill and flawed when she was with Christian - that she always had to be perfect.
And I appreciate that you aren't drawing the love triangle out for forever.
:)
12/17/2010 c18 Ritka2190
Love the story! very interesting, and attention grabbing the only thing bad i can say that sometimes the names of your characters change for instance in this chapter who is George? is it Christopher? and her fathers name was changed in between paragraphs a couple of chapters back first it was steve then it was Ben. it's just really confusing and it takes away from the story because you just sit there tring to understand who the people are, or why their names have changed...otherwise its a great story! :)
Love the story! very interesting, and attention grabbing the only thing bad i can say that sometimes the names of your characters change for instance in this chapter who is George? is it Christopher? and her fathers name was changed in between paragraphs a couple of chapters back first it was steve then it was Ben. it's just really confusing and it takes away from the story because you just sit there tring to understand who the people are, or why their names have changed...otherwise its a great story! :)
12/16/2010 c18 redambrosia
OMFG YOU'RE BACK & TRISTAN IS BACK! & HELL YEA I LOVED THAT BEATING UP THE HOST SCENE! & AJ & TRISTAN ARE BONDING OVER THEIR LOVE FOR NYX! Oh & did I mention I MISSED UR A.SS!
OMFG YOU'RE BACK & TRISTAN IS BACK! & HELL YEA I LOVED THAT BEATING UP THE HOST SCENE! & AJ & TRISTAN ARE BONDING OVER THEIR LOVE FOR NYX! Oh & did I mention I MISSED UR A.SS!
12/16/2010 c18 Annaface
As always I really liked the chapter. Hot boys, fashion and music - what more could you want?
FYI, chapter 17 has been replaced with chapter 18.
Keep up the good work! :)
As always I really liked the chapter. Hot boys, fashion and music - what more could you want?
FYI, chapter 17 has been replaced with chapter 18.
Keep up the good work! :)
12/16/2010 c18 browneyes33
yay! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!. who's george? cause christopher is her friend that can design clothes. i miss nyx and tristan!
yay! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!. who's george? cause christopher is her friend that can design clothes. i miss nyx and tristan!
8/20/2010 c1
5CalledKatt
I'll eventually read this... I was drawn to the story because my baby is also named Nyx. She's a shorthaired domestic housecat.
Thanks for making my day
Katt

I'll eventually read this... I was drawn to the story because my baby is also named Nyx. She's a shorthaired domestic housecat.
Thanks for making my day
Katt
7/24/2010 c17 redambrosia
I just read your story and it is dramma! I love it and your writing and your leading lady! Please update soon.
I just read your story and it is dramma! I love it and your writing and your leading lady! Please update soon.
12/23/2009 c8
1Jinxed Rogue
fun story. interesting twists on the band genre here. your characters are deep, sharp and consistent. my main criticism so far would be how quickly tristan fell for nyx, other than that you're doing a really good job. :)

fun story. interesting twists on the band genre here. your characters are deep, sharp and consistent. my main criticism so far would be how quickly tristan fell for nyx, other than that you're doing a really good job. :)