for Lifestyles of the Rich and Infamous8/13/2009 c17 FindingADream
Still too lazy to sign in. Heh.
I'm all sad now. haha. I wasn't going to read until you had more up because I knew this part was coming, but I couldn't help it. The emotions are so much more apparent this time around. You can really feel it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Still too lazy to sign in. Heh.
I'm all sad now. haha. I wasn't going to read until you had more up because I knew this part was coming, but I couldn't help it. The emotions are so much more apparent this time around. You can really feel it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/12/2009 c15 FindingADream
too lazy to sign in. I realy want to read 16 and 17, but I must go to sleep. But I can smell drama ensuing. I'm very excited.
~Kelsey
too lazy to sign in. I realy want to read 16 and 17, but I must go to sleep. But I can smell drama ensuing. I'm very excited.
~Kelsey
8/12/2009 c17 
3Moonlight Fidelity
Oh... sadness... wow typing is wierd... my hand is bleeding under my skin... yeah gross? I don't know, it feels really wierd though.
Anyways on with the review - sadness, YAY for three new chapters, but sadness for the breakup, though it was inevitable, i want them to get back together ASAP... even though it probably won't happen ASAP. Man... living together will be AWKWARD! Boo for AJ, it's officially decided that I plain don't like him, officially.
On the technical side, good grammar, good vocab and spelling as usual, awesome plot development, still very unique story. Update soon please
3Moonlight FidelityOh... sadness... wow typing is wierd... my hand is bleeding under my skin... yeah gross? I don't know, it feels really wierd though.
Anyways on with the review - sadness, YAY for three new chapters, but sadness for the breakup, though it was inevitable, i want them to get back together ASAP... even though it probably won't happen ASAP. Man... living together will be AWKWARD! Boo for AJ, it's officially decided that I plain don't like him, officially.
On the technical side, good grammar, good vocab and spelling as usual, awesome plot development, still very unique story. Update soon please
8/12/2009 c17 volleyballplayer30
I hope its not too late to fix things. Nyx and Tristan make such a cute couple. I like AJ, but I love Tristan. The way I see it, is that AJ has done too much stupid shit. As soon as he and Nyx got back together and started fighting, he would probably cheat on her again. Nyx deserves so much better. I hope Tristan just went straight home after leaving, because I don't want him doing anything stupid that would make him and Nyx be over for good. Anyways, I hope Nyx ends up with Tristan in the end and UPDATE SOON! I love your story!
I hope its not too late to fix things. Nyx and Tristan make such a cute couple. I like AJ, but I love Tristan. The way I see it, is that AJ has done too much stupid shit. As soon as he and Nyx got back together and started fighting, he would probably cheat on her again. Nyx deserves so much better. I hope Tristan just went straight home after leaving, because I don't want him doing anything stupid that would make him and Nyx be over for good. Anyways, I hope Nyx ends up with Tristan in the end and UPDATE SOON! I love your story!
8/12/2009 c17 18sasha blue
huh...
well i feel awful for saying this, but i'm not enjoying this as much as i used to. the last batch of chapters just seem completely rushed, and i'm sort of getting annoyed with the off and on thing. some things seem a little random BECAUSE you're going so fast and it just leaves me sitting with a tight smile. for instance- everytime something happens between nyx and tristan she always gets wasted beyond relief. it's a little ridiculous now i think. also whenever aj says something, she goes running-like the band? why doesn't he just make up his mind? and it's not ONLY his band. he can't just decide, darlene is in, nyx is out, darlene is out, nyx is in. my head is spinning in a not so good way here. i'm sort of at the point where whoever nyx does end up with whether it be tristan or aj, i'm just going to shrug my shoulders.
-_-
-Sasha
18sasha bluehuh...
well i feel awful for saying this, but i'm not enjoying this as much as i used to. the last batch of chapters just seem completely rushed, and i'm sort of getting annoyed with the off and on thing. some things seem a little random BECAUSE you're going so fast and it just leaves me sitting with a tight smile. for instance- everytime something happens between nyx and tristan she always gets wasted beyond relief. it's a little ridiculous now i think. also whenever aj says something, she goes running-like the band? why doesn't he just make up his mind? and it's not ONLY his band. he can't just decide, darlene is in, nyx is out, darlene is out, nyx is in. my head is spinning in a not so good way here. i'm sort of at the point where whoever nyx does end up with whether it be tristan or aj, i'm just going to shrug my shoulders.
-_-
-Sasha
8/12/2009 c17 yayawhynot89
Wow Tristan two stepped on her heart. The chapter was well written. keep up the good work
Wow Tristan two stepped on her heart. The chapter was well written. keep up the good work
8/11/2009 c17 Katie
Ik the chapter title says don't whine, but I gonna anyways. 1. She needs to get the fuck over AJ, he doesn't deserve her and she doesn't deserve the shit he's doing to her emotions. 2. I really like her with tristan so plz let them work it out though I think it might take something drastic like a hospitilization for nyx. 3. Also I hate when women try to get skinny for the cameras, she's not fat and curves are better than bone! 4. If tristan hooks up with some other girl I'm going to be rediculously pissed off. 5. I love chris and him being a good friend to her. Where is her brother throughout all the switching of girls. Also wouldn't the song have darlene on vocal? Plz update again like 2marrow cause I am addicted to this story and I wanna know what's gonna happen next!
Ik the chapter title says don't whine, but I gonna anyways. 1. She needs to get the fuck over AJ, he doesn't deserve her and she doesn't deserve the shit he's doing to her emotions. 2. I really like her with tristan so plz let them work it out though I think it might take something drastic like a hospitilization for nyx. 3. Also I hate when women try to get skinny for the cameras, she's not fat and curves are better than bone! 4. If tristan hooks up with some other girl I'm going to be rediculously pissed off. 5. I love chris and him being a good friend to her. Where is her brother throughout all the switching of girls. Also wouldn't the song have darlene on vocal? Plz update again like 2marrow cause I am addicted to this story and I wanna know what's gonna happen next!
8/6/2009 c14 Skive
A little late.. but just want to say congrats on the news! I'm soo excited for you, being published is a dream come true(and you've gotten one step closer). This story is amazing, especially this time around and I wish you luck! I'll definetly be buying a copy when the time comes around ;)
A little late.. but just want to say congrats on the news! I'm soo excited for you, being published is a dream come true(and you've gotten one step closer). This story is amazing, especially this time around and I wish you luck! I'll definetly be buying a copy when the time comes around ;)
8/5/2009 c14 FindingADream
Aww. They are quite literally the cutest thing ever. Going to vote now! Nyx and Tristan should totally win. They have amazingly amazing chemistry. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Aww. They are quite literally the cutest thing ever. Going to vote now! Nyx and Tristan should totally win. They have amazingly amazing chemistry. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
8/5/2009 c13 FindingADream
Writing that turned you on? Hell, reading it definitely did. It's great. Really. Was that scene where Nyx was trying to kiss Tristan but he wouldn't let her in the original? It seems familiar. Or maybe I'm just crazy. haha
Writing that turned you on? Hell, reading it definitely did. It's great. Really. Was that scene where Nyx was trying to kiss Tristan but he wouldn't let her in the original? It seems familiar. Or maybe I'm just crazy. haha
8/5/2009 c11 FindingADream
Holy crap that is SO cool! I'm so excited for you. I hope they like it. Well, I know they will actually. I mean, how could they not really?
Anyway, damn. That scene was INTENSE. :-D good job! And CONGRATS!
Holy crap that is SO cool! I'm so excited for you. I hope they like it. Well, I know they will actually. I mean, how could they not really?
Anyway, damn. That scene was INTENSE. :-D good job! And CONGRATS!
8/5/2009 c13 Nyx River
I have to commend you on your choice of music for the shoot. MGMT is awesome and so is this chapter! I am really excited for you and I hope all goes wells with the publishers. This story is amazing and WHEN it hits the shelves, I will definately grab a copy. Keep up the good work, and I will keep my fingers crossed as well as anything else that can be crossed.
I have to commend you on your choice of music for the shoot. MGMT is awesome and so is this chapter! I am really excited for you and I hope all goes wells with the publishers. This story is amazing and WHEN it hits the shelves, I will definately grab a copy. Keep up the good work, and I will keep my fingers crossed as well as anything else that can be crossed.
8/5/2009 c14 volleyballplayer30
Cute chapter! I love Tristan. I hope everything works out for them. Update soon!
Cute chapter! I love Tristan. I hope everything works out for them. Update soon!