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7/20/2008 c1 612simpleplan13
”to a million diminutive pieces of echoed tumult”.. into sounds better to me

I like your description here a lot, the simile is especially unique and powerful. I also like the shortness it makes it more powerful.

I also like the title with the word “vociferations” it was very unique and really great.

PS If you’re bored check out the Review Game and/or its Review Marathon (links in my profile).

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