for The Galactic War GW part 1: The Beginning7/15/2008 c1 Counting Petals
There were a couple of typos, but overall this was good. It caught and held my attention, mostly because you just plunged right into what was going on, making me wonder what was up.
There were a couple of typos, but overall this was good. It caught and held my attention, mostly because you just plunged right into what was going on, making me wonder what was up.