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12/22/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
Aw. Such a little sad thing.

All the questions seem kind of rhetorical. Which adds this amazingness to it :)

Big thumbs up to it!
5/3/2009 c1 4Stars.Shining
Aw! This was really good! Great protreal of emotions. The only thing that I would change (and this is totally my personal opinion!) but the line "Would you fix our love, our life, the past, or our present?" I would have changed it to: "Would you fix our love, our life, our past, our present?" But that's just me, no need to listen to me (I always do that, those are my favorite :p )

Anyway, good job! ^_^

P.S. Thanks for favoriting my story! I'll try to update soon for ya! :)
11/13/2008 c1 65noebody
this was a very good poem your emotions came off very well.
10/8/2008 c1 8Written
aww that was sort of sad but also kind of sweet and nostalgic, I think. good work.
9/4/2008 c1 8MidnightSeaNymph
oh, that's so sweet. kinda made me wanna cry.

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