for My Heart Was Broken1/26/2010 c1 
1Love Frog
I like it. It sounds exactly how I felt after my boyfriend dumped me. Good job :)
1Love FrogI like it. It sounds exactly how I felt after my boyfriend dumped me. Good job :)
12/22/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
"In secret I dream of a future with you."
It really makes me feel as if the whole poem was just an illusion of a dreamer, and that the focus of the poem was completely ignorant.
Aw.
I feel your pain, sista.
4HighOnBrokenWings"In secret I dream of a future with you."
It really makes me feel as if the whole poem was just an illusion of a dreamer, and that the focus of the poem was completely ignorant.
Aw.
I feel your pain, sista.
1/30/2009 c1 15Lily Among Thorns '98
Great poem. A few misspellings, but you did say in your profile that that happens. It's pretty awesome, the feelings that it gives off.
15Lily Among Thorns '98Great poem. A few misspellings, but you did say in your profile that that happens. It's pretty awesome, the feelings that it gives off.
9/25/2008 c1 8Written
this has a lot of strong emotion in it. it's so typical for a person to still love someone, even after all that they've done. keep writing :)
8Writtenthis has a lot of strong emotion in it. it's so typical for a person to still love someone, even after all that they've done. keep writing :)
7/16/2008 c1 173Little girl Big world
wow this was really good!
i especially like the line "But still after all you did I still love you." i can definitely relate!
great job!
173Little girl Big worldwow this was really good!
i especially like the line "But still after all you did I still love you." i can definitely relate!
great job!
7/16/2008 c1 4Jinxed Orangutan
beautifully written...Loved it... You rock... do write some more...will be waiting anxiously...
And thanks for adding my story to your favourite list. meant a lot to me. love you
4Jinxed Orangutanbeautifully written...Loved it... You rock... do write some more...will be waiting anxiously...
And thanks for adding my story to your favourite list. meant a lot to me. love you