for Everyone needs Faith8/3/2008 c1 RogueLP
Great original work ZD.
I love how your creating a plot line within the same old "Gabriel, Uriel, Samson, michael, pergatory" business. I'm looking forward to the introduction of Hyde and Dylan...i sense they're important characters.
I like Faith by the way. Done in excellent style...as usual :)
Great original work ZD.
I love how your creating a plot line within the same old "Gabriel, Uriel, Samson, michael, pergatory" business. I'm looking forward to the introduction of Hyde and Dylan...i sense they're important characters.
I like Faith by the way. Done in excellent style...as usual :)
7/26/2008 c1 
2En-En-chan
And En-En-chan is now stalking Zadien's fictionpress account! MWAHAHAHAH! :coughs and splutters:
Do you wanna know what was the first thing that went through my head when I came to the page? It wasn't as long as TFG! Weird, but I enjoyed the long chapters. They looked long, but when I was reading, it didn't actually feel that long; I think it's because everything flowed easily, and there weren't many breaks. That's why I love your writing!
O.O Oh! Faith isn't human! Is she a demon or something like that?
Well, very sorry for the short review, but I can hardly comment on the prologue. Can't wait for your next update! Please write longer chapters! I like the long chapters. ^-^
I would've reviewed the 13th chapter of TFG earlier, but I went to Bath for the past few days, and so I couldn't use the computer!
En-En-chan
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2En-En-chanAnd En-En-chan is now stalking Zadien's fictionpress account! MWAHAHAHAH! :coughs and splutters:
Do you wanna know what was the first thing that went through my head when I came to the page? It wasn't as long as TFG! Weird, but I enjoyed the long chapters. They looked long, but when I was reading, it didn't actually feel that long; I think it's because everything flowed easily, and there weren't many breaks. That's why I love your writing!
O.O Oh! Faith isn't human! Is she a demon or something like that?
Well, very sorry for the short review, but I can hardly comment on the prologue. Can't wait for your next update! Please write longer chapters! I like the long chapters. ^-^
I would've reviewed the 13th chapter of TFG earlier, but I went to Bath for the past few days, and so I couldn't use the computer!
En-En-chan
x
7/22/2008 c1 this requires pants
Oh! You already know what I think of this (and I love it, in case you'd forgotten) so I hope you continue! Awesome start!
- Maya
Oh! You already know what I think of this (and I love it, in case you'd forgotten) so I hope you continue! Awesome start!
- Maya
7/21/2008 c1 MOONLIGHT SHADOW HUNTRESS
Nice prologue. From what you've already told me about this story of yours i just know it's gunna be good.
Hoping to see more from you soon good job!
^_^
Nice prologue. From what you've already told me about this story of yours i just know it's gunna be good.
Hoping to see more from you soon good job!
^_^
7/21/2008 c1 ME
reads like one of your stories, all right. i think i need to read more maybe of the story before i can make a judgement, y'know? i'm a bit confused by the wee second bit there. why is it THE gabrielle? and who is gabrielle and what does she have to do with it all? o.o anyway. that's it.
oh. and. how does rain emphasise with you? _ cuz i'm pretty sure you meant empathise.
reads like one of your stories, all right. i think i need to read more maybe of the story before i can make a judgement, y'know? i'm a bit confused by the wee second bit there. why is it THE gabrielle? and who is gabrielle and what does she have to do with it all? o.o anyway. that's it.
oh. and. how does rain emphasise with you? _ cuz i'm pretty sure you meant empathise.
7/20/2008 c1 IrrevocablyDying
Hey dudess, how's it soakin'?
I liked it, although it was confusing, the last bit, even for a prologue. How come Faith wants to protect Cleo so much? (To the extent that she already has, I mean) What's Hyde's relation to her? And well, the writing style was pretty kick-ass. Details to suck you in and wanting to read more, like the rune on her glove, I think it was, and Uriel and the Gabrielle. What's Aubrey's relation to Serena? And the whole Angelic system, might want to explain that a wee bit further. All in all, I'm diggin' it thus far. What happens next? I like Faith's response to Cleo about Mrs. Winters, and blunt force trauma and such.
Much love, my lovely,
-Par
Hey dudess, how's it soakin'?
I liked it, although it was confusing, the last bit, even for a prologue. How come Faith wants to protect Cleo so much? (To the extent that she already has, I mean) What's Hyde's relation to her? And well, the writing style was pretty kick-ass. Details to suck you in and wanting to read more, like the rune on her glove, I think it was, and Uriel and the Gabrielle. What's Aubrey's relation to Serena? And the whole Angelic system, might want to explain that a wee bit further. All in all, I'm diggin' it thus far. What happens next? I like Faith's response to Cleo about Mrs. Winters, and blunt force trauma and such.
Much love, my lovely,
-Par
7/20/2008 c1 Settican
Love it! I can't wait to read more and learn more about the characters :D
Love it! I can't wait to read more and learn more about the characters :D
7/17/2008 c1 Mikey
Awesome work, Look forward to seeing more up on the site.
gogo Zadien
Awesome work, Look forward to seeing more up on the site.
gogo Zadien