
12/15/2008 c1
5Camelia Sinensis
i know it's meant to be angst, but it was almost adorable for me.
i could see her as a pretty pretty porcelain doll (torn apart, but who cares)

i know it's meant to be angst, but it was almost adorable for me.
i could see her as a pretty pretty porcelain doll (torn apart, but who cares)
10/15/2008 c1 a hiding girl
(it won't let me log on-you'll have to forgive me)
i find this very emotional. i love the last lines. actually, i love everything about this piece, to be honest.
(it won't let me log on-you'll have to forgive me)
i find this very emotional. i love the last lines. actually, i love everything about this piece, to be honest.
7/29/2008 c1
65Aquafied
i think what people forget
is that all of life's themes are cliche and repeated
and taken from this or that
i thought this was interesting and i liked the shortness of it
it conveyed its point quite well

i think what people forget
is that all of life's themes are cliche and repeated
and taken from this or that
i thought this was interesting and i liked the shortness of it
it conveyed its point quite well
7/20/2008 c1
194yodel a blue streak
I agree with Ashelin. The beginning seemed a bit cliche to me, but then I read the line "when she tried to cut herself out of her body" which I absolutely love, and the rest seems fresh, honest, authentic...

I agree with Ashelin. The beginning seemed a bit cliche to me, but then I read the line "when she tried to cut herself out of her body" which I absolutely love, and the rest seems fresh, honest, authentic...